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“The Stumble and Rise” Poetry Contest
Limerick poetry form 
Sponsored by: Jami Patterson

The Stumble and Rise

This is my tale of stumble and rise
Which I have say, took me by surprise
I shed a few tears
On hearing the cheers
My heart was simply bursting with pride.

There was I, dancing along the street
Singing and swanking upon my feet
I got in a fix
O'er my feet I tripped
And cartwheeled down hill like an athlete.

Unaware I'd performed to a crowd
Till I’d heard them cheering me out loud
After the stumble 
I rose most humble 
And grateful, so I stood there and bowed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Woods Avatar
October 2, 2025 at 12:40 PM
I can see it like a movie... so well worded and funny! Xo
Edmonds  Avatar
October 2, 2025 at 12:55 PM
Thank you Crystol, I’m pleased you enjoyed the read and saw it like a movie… Beryl
Crandall Avatar
October 1, 2025 at 9:27 PM
Congratulations Beryl, on your poem, and on your cartwheels! I never could do a cartwheel!
Edmonds  Avatar
October 1, 2025 at 11:20 PM
Those were the days when us sisters would do cartwheel's in the garden. Thank you David… Beryl
Canerdy Avatar
October 1, 2025 at 1:08 PM
Great story told in limerick form, Beryl. CONGRATS on your win. Janice
Edmonds  Avatar
October 1, 2025 at 5:15 PM
Thank you Janice, most appreciated… Beryl
Kendrick Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 4:36 AM
Ahh!! How creative is this one. Way to go. I guess maybe a contest since I have seen a number of this. I believe this on should be a great contender for the contest. Sara K
Edmonds  Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 5:14 AM
Thank you Sara, yes it’s for a contest which inspired this write… Beryl
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