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the stumble and rise

when crossing a square as I scurried

          my feet crossed instead, for I hurried

               but while falling, with faults

     it morphed sweet to a waltz …

midst a chorus of “Yays!” - off I surried.
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September 25, 2025 at 9:48 AM
Love your verse, " It morphed sweet to a waltz … Midst a chorus of “Yays!” - off I surried." Great imagination.
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September 25, 2025 at 7:14 PM
Thank you so very kindly, Eve! Nice to “see” you again! :o) <3
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