Rowena Velasco Poet Limerick

The Stumble and Rise

The Stumble and Rise Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Jami Patterson
Contest Judged:  9/30/2025 8:28:00 AM
( Honorable Mention )


I stumbled straight down by surprise,
To laughter and widening eyes-
But I jumped to my feet,
Made the misstep a beat
and waltzed as the crowd cheered my rise.

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Tom Cunningham September 15, 2025 at 9:39 PM I hope you gave the audience a bow and a curtesy lol. Tom Rowena Velasco September 17, 2025 at 4:37 AM Thank you so much, Tom. That really made me smile. I’ll remember to give a bow and curtsy just for you next time!

Hilda Greenhough September 15, 2025 at 6:20 PM I like your poem. It was clever to cover embarrassment with a positive attitude. Rowena Velasco September 15, 2025 at 6:25 PM Thank you! I’m glad you enjoyed it. I believe a little humor and positivity can turn even awkward moments into something to smile about.

sara Etgen-Baker September 14, 2025 at 5:06 PM delightful Limerick and sound contest entry. wishing you the best, hugs, Sara Rowena Velasco September 14, 2025 at 10:44 PM Thank you so much, Sara! Your kind words and good wishes mean a lot. Hugs back to you.

Christuraj Alex September 13, 2025 at 11:22 PM A very grand limerick. Rowena Velasco September 14, 2025 at 1:57 AM Tnx Alex

Gershon Wolf September 13, 2025 at 10:23 PM There's a whole world in this poem, Rowena. An absolute fave for me forever. Thank you so much for sharing. Happy Weekend, Gershon Rowena Velasco September 13, 2025 at 10:26 PM That means so much, Gershon — thank you for embracing my words so kindly. Wishing you a joyful and peaceful weekend too!