Get Your Premium Membership

The Straw

The straw that broke the camel’s back A straw quite ordinary Its weight did not mean very much Not challenging to carry But even though this measly straw Was worthless on its own It had a value and a strength That was only timely shown The straw itself, pretentious not Had knowledge of its role Quite useless was it by itself This it could not control But when it was allowed to be A part of bale or heap Its value all at once appeared To be no longer cheap And so one day to its surprise It really didn’t know It was the one who did the trick Before anyone could say ’Ho!’ Wendy Nipas

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 6/11/2020 5:03:00 PM
Hello Wendy Nipas, i cheer for the straw. Enjoy your friend.
Login to Reply
De Beaulieu Avatar
Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/14/2020 10:42:00 AM
Hello Wendy you are welcome. Enjoyed this poem. Have a nice day my friend.
Nipas Avatar
Wendy Nipas
Date: 6/11/2020 5:34:00 PM
Thank you Darlene. Much appreciated.
Date: 6/11/2020 1:30:00 PM
Well done! Aloha! Rico
Login to Reply
Nipas Avatar
Wendy Nipas
Date: 6/11/2020 2:00:00 PM
Thank you so much Rico. Very kind of you.
Date: 6/11/2020 11:14:00 AM
Great write Wendy! :))) Maureen
Login to Reply
Nipas Avatar
Wendy Nipas
Date: 6/11/2020 2:00:00 PM
Thank you. Glad you liked it.

Book: Reflection on the Important Things