The Straw

The straw that broke the camel’s back
A straw quite ordinary
Its weight did not mean very much
Not challenging to carry

But even though this measly straw
Was worthless on its own
It had a value and a strength
That was only timely shown

The straw itself, pretentious not
Had knowledge of its role
Quite useless was it by itself
This it could not control

But when it was allowed to be
A part of bale or heap
Its value all at once appeared
To be no longer cheap

And so one day to its surprise
It really didn’t know
It was the one who did the trick
Before anyone could say ’Ho!’

Wendy Nipas

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 6/11/2020 5:03:00 PM
Hello Wendy Nipas, i cheer for the straw. Enjoy your friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/14/2020 10:42:00 AM
Hello Wendy you are welcome. Enjoyed this poem. Have a nice day my friend.
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Wendy Nipas
Date: 6/11/2020 5:34:00 PM
Thank you Darlene. Much appreciated.
Date: 6/11/2020 1:30:00 PM
Well done! Aloha! Rico
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Wendy Nipas
Date: 6/11/2020 2:00:00 PM
Thank you so much Rico. Very kind of you.
Date: 6/11/2020 11:14:00 AM
Great write Wendy! :))) Maureen
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Wendy Nipas
Date: 6/11/2020 2:00:00 PM
Thank you. Glad you liked it.
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