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The Stragglers Gate

The distant sound of hoopbeats stirs the air those clouds sweet dusty dreams of yesteryear float lazily across his fluttering eyes crease wrinkled face to smile and eyes to tear. They rode, this ragged trio, on the winds the age of youthful never ending friends a-gallop in a world where horses fly alone upon a trail that never ends. They wait, make camp at stragglers gate knowing none could ride beyond their fate hold steady in a dream that cannot die That they will someday ride a cloudless sky 4/2/2020

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Date: 4/10/2020 8:21:00 PM
Hello John … a nicely written poem dedicated to those who have gone before us and we are heading there is how I interpreted your verse - enjoyable indeed - thank you John - Lindsay
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Date: 4/4/2020 2:06:00 PM
Like this very much, John. BTW way. I think you meant "they rode" not "They road." As for my take on snake, I think it's very accurate. Next time you see a hearse heading for a cemetery, think of my poem, it should match what you see. / Thanks for stopping by. / M
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John Lawless
Date: 4/4/2020 5:40:00 PM
Thanks for the pickup...as in they rode that road
Date: 4/2/2020 10:08:00 PM
This conjures up the memories of dreams, so full of yearning hope, it's breathtaking, John-
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John Lawless
Date: 4/3/2020 7:18:00 AM
Thank you Michelle for the visit and the uplifting comment
Date: 4/2/2020 8:20:00 PM
This is really gorgeous John! I am sure it will do well in the contest. Stay safe xxoo
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John Lawless
Date: 4/3/2020 7:16:00 AM
Thank you Connie. Hope all is well with you and yours

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