The Storyteller

Rustling epic tales,
Aged limbs whisper to the grains:
Myths of olden days.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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November 20, 2009 at 1:09 PM
It's like a write about the dark ages, very nice Haiku >> James
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November 17, 2009 at 12:54 PM
Wonderful images in this poem. Much for the reader to ponder in just three lines. My favorite is line two. You are so good with these concise poems. Keep up the good writing. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen
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November 11, 2009 at 11:15 PM
Ooh, love the ancient, mysterious feel to this one! Hugs, Donna
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November 10, 2009 at 9:05 PM
The Myths Of Olden Days..i enjoy hearing them again and again--Charma
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November 9, 2009 at 11:18 AM
LOVE THIS ONE, RAUL. SUCH PERFECT DESCRIPTIVE WORDS. LOVE, LAINIE
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November 8, 2009 at 8:16 PM
Very nice...enjoyed..Marty
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November 6, 2009 at 10:35 AM
Thank you for sharing another of your dynamic writes Raul. Love, Carol
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November 5, 2009 at 3:11 PM
Nicely done cowboy Haiku. Keep writing. Sara
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November 5, 2009 at 10:04 AM
Nice very very nice. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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