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The Storyteller

Rustling epic tales, Aged limbs whisper to the grains: Myths of olden days.

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James Fraser

Date: 11/20/2009 1:09:00 PM

It's like a write about the dark ages, very nice Haiku >> James

Date: 11/17/2009 12:54:00 PM

Wonderful images in this poem. Much for the reader to ponder in just three lines. My favorite is line two. You are so good with these concise poems. Keep up the good writing. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

Donna Golden

Date: 11/11/2009 11:15:00 PM

Ooh, love the ancient, mysterious feel to this one! Hugs, Donna

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/10/2009 9:05:00 PM

The Myths Of Olden Days..i enjoy hearing them again and again--Charma

Elaine George

Date: 11/9/2009 11:18:00 AM

LOVE THIS ONE, RAUL. SUCH PERFECT DESCRIPTIVE WORDS. LOVE, LAINIE

Marty Owens

Date: 11/8/2009 8:16:00 PM

Very nice...enjoyed..Marty

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/6/2009 10:35:00 AM

Thank you for sharing another of your dynamic writes Raul. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/5/2009 3:11:00 PM

Nicely done cowboy Haiku. Keep writing. Sara

Anthony Nutter

Date: 11/5/2009 10:04:00 AM

Nice very very nice. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit