The Story of You

I  could hear my own heart beating 
So strong the rhythm grew
It echoes like thunder 
as it tells me the story of you.

You surround yourself in mystery 
You've been hurt so many times
Falling with all you are 
For some scoundrel's nursery rhymes .

He has taken all he wanted
Then discarded you aside
He made you feel so worthless 
You were all torn up inside.

All the love and trust you gave 
Was thrown back in your face
So you hide away your feelings 
In a very secret place .

Now its my turn to hold you
My arms around your waist 
Swaying to the music 
As wary lips I taste .

We talk and walk for hours 
The days soon turn to weeks
Love and its healing powers 
Return the colour to your cheeks .

The lips that were so wary 
Are now synchronised with mine 
The poetry of romance
Replacing unfeeling nursery rhyme .

You put aside the pain of betrayal
Once more the passion burns 
and with each day that passes 
A little more of you returns .

I am turning over the pages
Every hour I learn something new
As my heart narrates the story 
and reveals the mystery of you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A   Avatar
May 22, 2014 at 12:06 PM
thank you for the comment on my comment
A   Avatar
May 21, 2014 at 6:41 PM
Hi Darren, wow..is this another collaboration. This is awesome, stunning + breathtaking... XOX~ Linda
Allison Avatar
May 22, 2014 at 11:30 AM
You can't improve on perfection Darren! hugs Jan xx
Watson Avatar
May 22, 2014 at 4:19 AM
Thank you , This is my own work Linda , I do love collaborations and I'm sure this would have been better had I collaborated but I enjoyed writing it anyway.
Nance Avatar
May 21, 2014 at 4:23 PM
Awesome, I love the last stanza, way to hit it home. good job :)
Manassian Avatar
May 21, 2014 at 11:47 AM
I must say...This is exquisite in every way! Lovely write.
D. Avatar
May 21, 2014 at 11:45 AM
very awesome and creative poem
Torres Avatar
May 21, 2014 at 7:43 AM
WOW!!!.. this is a perfect 10, Daz!!! Very well written... Great penned!!! :O))
Smith Avatar
May 21, 2014 at 7:20 AM
Very beautiful and heartfelt Darren...wonderful write Tim
Allison Avatar
May 21, 2014 at 6:00 AM
Simply Perfection Darren - I can truly relate to this..Off to favourites it goes! Hugs as ever my wonderful friend. Jan xxx
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