The Story of My Life

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10.18am March 18, 2025

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My fate rolled since childhood at my bottom to study, live and work far from birth home; Wanted to go back for good, Time had slow pace in my hood, My joints might soon be cracking in random.

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Len Gasun

Date: 3/27/2025 8:39:00 AM

Contest Judged: 3/22/2025 2:42:00 PM Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich Place 7 (1-7 multi w)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/22/2025 3:35:00 PM

I like your honesty in this one. Congrats, dear. Soupmail for you

Len Gasun
Date: 3/23/2025 5:27:00 AM

Oh thank you so much for aknowledging my poem in your contest my dear poet friend Andrea. Your approval through my win means a lot to me. Ok, i will go and read your soupmail later. Thanks you sooo much. Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/18/2025 3:12:00 AM

- Back to your roots... lovely, Len :) - hugs

Len Gasun
Date: 3/22/2025 8:30:00 AM

Yes, still planning coz time flies so fast and my parent is getting older and so do I. So I need to be with my parent in her old year my dear poet friend Anne-lise. Thanks a lot for reading my poem and your uplifting words. Blessings to you always. Hugs

Sand Blown

Date: 3/18/2025 1:18:00 AM

so exact....man oh man......'...time had slow pace in my hood...'......bingo......len

Len Gasun
Date: 3/22/2025 8:27:00 AM

Thanks a lot my dear poet friend for reading my poem and your kind words. Blessings to you. Hugs