The Story of my Life

Poet's Notes

(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Krishnanand Guptar.

Placed First in :

A 5-Liner on your Life Poetry Contest

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Crystol Woods

Date: 3/23/2025 9:52:00 AM

Love the quote and the poem! Bearing your own burdens is noble but we all need a hand every now and then. I'm so glad to see your still standing after all. Xoxo

Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 3/23/2025 10:16:00 AM

Thanks a lot, poetess, for visiting my page and for appreciating the write. It means so much to me. Wish you a pleasant day.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/22/2025 2:49:00 PM

Well written awesome metaphorical poem. Congrats

Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 3/23/2025 7:46:00 AM

Thank you poetess for appreciating the above write and for its placement in the poetry contest sponsored by you. Wish you a pleasant day full of blessing.

Valsa George

Date: 3/16/2025 6:56:00 AM

Though others may try to defeat us, we can stand on our own feet and steady ourselves, if we have the will and courage. I enjoyed the comparison of the pine tree shattered by adverse winds, but still standing firm on ground to your own life. Beautiful six liner! All the best dear Krishnanand.

Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 3/16/2025 8:16:00 AM

Thanks a lot dear friend for visiting my page and appreciating the above write. Your positive comments and kind wishes have raised my spirits high. Wish you a pleasant evening.