The Story of Love

The story of love


The story of love 
is woven 
with silken threads
on a cloud in heaven
where no one sees

Love brings happiness
yes
but we all forget the pain
the sorrows the sadness the strain

It is woven to trap us
with beauty and richness
but behind it all
is fear and sadness

We all fall in love
but do we all obtain it?
no, we've lost it

Now we are lonely
this is how it is
a wondrous mystery.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 1/13/2009 8:12:00 PM
its really soooooo beautiful and sweet and thanx for ur sweet comments
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Date: 1/9/2009 12:13:00 PM
Guess I just keep writing poetry until it brightens my day. Love this piece and really love how the words just flow. Enjoyed readind it and have a great day.
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Date: 1/9/2009 9:44:00 AM
Maryam, this a beautiful and heart felt piece. It is sad how love can tear us apart. Young or old or in between. No one is safe. But hopefully, it makes your heart grow and the next time (and especially when you're young, there usually a next time) we learn more about ourselves and what we want. It just takes time to heal. No one escapes the scars, though. Awesome write! Love and a BIG HUG, Robin
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Date: 1/9/2009 8:15:00 AM
OMG wow.. I really love it
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