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The Story of Edward

Edward was a boy, Who lived in London. He was not so well to do, On him was many a burden. His father; a priest he was, Managed to feed the boy. Albeit his lowly wages, He lived in peace and joy. Edward had his father Who meant all to him, But his small world shattered With no happiness within. With his father gone Edward was terrified. There was no one who would take him in, No one whom he loved. So he left his small home Which he would surely miss, To find the love he had lost In a cruel world like this. Nobody noticed the boy Wandering the streets alone. Without anybody by his side He was so forlorn. He lived like a tramp; Walking miles and miles barefoot. Hungry and tired to death Covered in dirt and soot. With his feet bleeding And sun-burnt skin, He fainted on doorstep Of a little inn Waking up He found himself lying on a bed, With a lady by his side Stroking his forehead. Looking at young Edward with loving eyes She said,"There, there,you surely need some rest" She loved and cared a lot For this sweet little guest. He smiled back at her And merrily he thought; Life isn't so bad: At last he had found what he eagerly sought.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/24/2013 4:22:00 PM
This work is awesome!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara
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Date: 9/22/2013 7:58:00 PM
Rishav, nice Metrical verse win... luv~Linda
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Date: 9/21/2013 9:09:00 AM
even in its sadness you have crafted a beautiful poem...congrats on your win :)
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Date: 9/21/2013 12:04:00 AM
Congrats on winning the place in the contest, Rishav
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Date: 9/14/2013 7:29:00 PM
Rishav, CONGRATULATIONS, on having your poem FEATURED on the soups Home Page:-). Good-Night **Linda**
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Date: 8/30/2013 4:49:00 PM
great story, Rishav, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* Skat
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Rishav Chakrabarti
Date: 9/2/2013 9:12:00 AM
thanks for the comment
Date: 8/29/2013 5:52:00 AM
Rishav , thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 8/29/2013 4:46:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup, Rishav ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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