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The Stormy Night

The wind blows through the trees, Casting shadows on the house, The only sound to be heard, Is the scratching of a mouse, A ghostly moan comes from the walls, The cool air smells of mothballs, A scream erupts from a child's chest, Her mother walks in and presses her head to breast, Hush now my child she says as she strokes her hair, Then the thunder roars like a bear, The little girl falls fast asleep, Her mother lays her down there is not a peep, Her mother leaves and closes the door, And the little girl dreams once more.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/28/2015 2:25:00 PM
- Hello new member: Christian - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thank you for choosing to share your poem here with us. - I look forward to reading more in the future. - Have a good time and I wish you good luck. - (Give and receive comments) - / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/27/2015 6:38:00 PM
Christina, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 5/27/2015 5:04:00 PM
Christian, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 5/27/2015 12:53:00 PM
Hello here my new found poet. wanted to leave you a comment about this funny and awesome story of the stormy night. I like how the mother knows her child is in distress and is always there. Also the line about the bear. it was good and what I needed to hear and or read. so thank you
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