The Storm Is Coming

I remember the love we shared,
We thought it would last forever.
We talked about How we would,
Grow old together rocking on the,
Front porch laughing at,
Each other's stale jokes.
Then I see the dark clouds form 
The smile is gone.
The laughs have disappeared.
All I see is the look on your,
Face that tells all.
What I see when I look inside,
My heart is the person I fell in love with.
You were my best friend.
The one person I could tell,
All my hopes and dreams to.
Now it's all gone because,
The Storm is coming,
And I can't stop it.
It is lost forever.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 8/16/2022 6:23:00 AM
Hi Shirley, Many can relate to your poem; who doesn't want a forever love? It is so sad when a love story turns bad. You described it very well. What exactly happened? You give the reader just enough to get their minds spinning. Good title and content. Have a nice day-Alexis
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Shirley Hudson
Date: 8/16/2022 2:53:00 PM
Actually the funny thing is after i wrote this I wrote "Nightmares at 1am." Long story short a promise was broken...a raised hand that should have never been so....I walked away never regretting that decision. I'm posting it today. Thank you for your very kind comments i really appreciate it. As my nephew says that my poems are stories that you only find in books. HA!! IF Only I wish haha. Have a nice day!! if you have a chance ck out the downfall of mankind 2nd page, alittle of the same. Congrats over 10 pages....i got so giddy just turning over little bitty 3 pages hahaha. I bow to your excellence....
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