The Stoner

Written: June 11, 2026, for a contest sponsored by Charles Messina ******************* The Stoner I was sitting on the corner, stoned When out of the blue, my dead aunt phoned How could this be, she rests in peace Right beside my loving niece I answered the phone, and my auntie said "I know you think that I am dead" "I'm alive"- my auntie moaned Or- could it be that you're just- "Stoned" ****************************************************** In a thunderhead, she floated, frail as smoke, "Grandpa's humor struck like lightning's stroke," Thru the tangled wire, heaven rose, vast and deep, "While restless angels stole the sleep I used to keep." Then lightning struck along the wire, my heart ignited, ablaze in fire. She whispered, "that is only your brain, tumbling wildly in the acid rain."
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George Avatar
August 16, 2026 at 7:40 PM
Back to your wonderful poem with hearty congratulations on your first place win.
Anaya Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 2:27 PM
Back with Congratulations!!!! 💎
Anaya Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 2:22 PM
Goldsmith Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 10:28 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading this creative/fun "The Stoner" write/story again. Have a fun day with your wonderful win...............
Messina Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 5:09 PM
You nailed it with this one, Lasaad. Great entry! Congratulations on your top win in my contest!
Poet Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 5:17 AM
Charles, much appreciate your comment and my wonderful placement in your contest.
George Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 6:50 AM
The addicts feel a knd of acid rain flowing into their brain, burning every sinew of their body...being left in a kind of psychedelic frenzy. Very powerful. All the best in the contest dear Lasaad
Maverick Avatar
June 13, 2026 at 1:22 PM
WOW I feel drained.!! A wild contest Entry for sure Sotto.. I hope it does well.? All blessings.'
Godwin Avatar
June 11, 2026 at 6:25 PM
I don't think he's stoned, I think he took acid. Your lines are the most intense and dramatic of all the ones I've read. Great job, it demands notice.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
June 11, 2026 at 4:46 PM
loved your addition to Charles' poem...the ending is imaginative and perfect. Best wishes, dear Sotto, with this contest entry.
Kendrick Avatar
June 11, 2026 at 4:26 PM
Well, this one reads like a good contender for the contest to me even though I don't know anything about being high or stoned other than what I have seen on TV, in movies and in other people. Thank you for sharing this one with us. Sara K.
Dietrich Avatar
June 11, 2026 at 3:18 PM
That last line is so clever. Acid rain. Goes really well if the guy was on LSD!
Goldsmith Avatar
June 11, 2026 at 1:21 PM
I enjoyed reading this creative/fun "The Stoner" write/story. Great Rhyme Here... "Good Luck" We both did this fun contest.. Have a fun day writing away..........
Andresen Avatar
June 11, 2026 at 11:56 AM
- An imaginative and wonderful poem, Las :) - Best wishes :) - hugs
Anaya Avatar
June 11, 2026 at 11:45 AM
A gentle angelic-like, yet stemming perspective most interesting. A winner, dear poet. Blessings
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