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Written 9th June 2026 - Verse 3 and 4 

The Stoner Poetry Contest - Collaboration 

Sponsored by: Charles Messina 

 

 

The Stoner

I was sitting on the corner, stoned When out of the blue, my dead aunt phoned How could this be, she rests in peace Right beside my loving niece I answered the phone, and my auntie said "I know you think that I am dead" "I'm alive"- my auntie moaned Or- could it be that you're just- “Stoned" I sat there thinking was it true Aunt was still on the planet too Had I dreamed that she’d passed away Whilst she’s still here in light of day. As I stood up to stagger home There was a ring come on my phone It was my aunt in floods of tears “You’re right my boy, been gone for years”.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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August 12, 2026 at 7:05 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest with this beautifully crafted poem. Beryl.
Edmonds  Avatar
August 12, 2026 at 10:01 AM
Thank you Sotto, it was fun to write for the collaboration … Beryl ✍️
Volumes Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 12:29 PM
Really enjoyed this one Beryl. Congrats!
Edmonds  Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 12:33 PM
Thank you very much indeed SV, pleased you enjoyed the read… Beryl
Goldsmith Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 10:26 AM
Congratulations on your win.  I enjoyed reading this fun " The Stoner" write. Love your great ending...  Have a fun day with your wonderful win...............
Edmonds  Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 12:32 PM
Thank you Paula, have a wonderful day too, writing the day away… Beryl ✍️
Messina Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 5:03 PM
Love this, Beryl. The ending was awesome! Congratulations on your top placement in my contest. Thanks for entering!
Edmonds  Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 5:51 PM
Thank you so much Charles, I’m delighted with my placement in your contest…. Beryl
Anaya Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 2:43 PM
Congratulations Beryl! Great poem🙌
Edmonds  Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 5:45 PM
Thank you very much Anaya… Beryl 🌸
Rodgers Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 7:01 AM
Dear Beryl, being an addictions counselor and having my own battle with drugs and alcohol when I was young, I can relate to your poem in so many ways. I truly enjoyed reading your poem today. Blessings, Daniel
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August 9, 2026 at 5:44 PM
A belated thank you Daniel. It’s a wonderful thing that you do, counselling those in need of support with their difficulties. I’m pleased you enjoyed reading this collaboration poem… Blessings in return… Beryl
Rolland Avatar
June 15, 2026 at 2:35 PM
so touching words, we need aunts and nieces definitely
Edmonds  Avatar
June 15, 2026 at 4:15 PM
So we do, thank you Yann, very grateful that you read and commented too… Beryl
Winter Avatar
June 15, 2026 at 8:09 AM
Dear Beryl, this one is brilliantly written. I love the rhyming of this poem :)
Edmonds  Avatar
June 15, 2026 at 8:23 AM
Dear Anne, thank you, it was a joy to join in on ‘The Stoner’ collaboration contest, however it goes… Beryl
Wolf Avatar
June 11, 2026 at 7:41 PM
You really made this one 'come alive,' Beryl. Great penning. :) gw
Edmonds  Avatar
June 11, 2026 at 11:39 PM
Thank you Gershon, appreciated. Hugs returned… Beryl
Jones Avatar
June 11, 2026 at 2:45 AM
Great job I was engaged and entertained Beryl! Best wishes in the contest!
Edmonds  Avatar
June 11, 2026 at 3:06 AM
Thanks so much Karen, pleased to read you were engaged and entertained, who could wish for anything more… Beryl
Godwin Avatar
June 10, 2026 at 3:55 PM
ew oh yi, spooky, twilight zone feel fully coated me after the last line. I doubt anyone else goes this route, originality will probably stand out. I certainly didn't feel or see it coming. Spooked me, all my timbers shivered!
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June 10, 2026 at 4:52 PM
Dear CayCay, reading my poem again and your reply, late tonight, has spooked me too, it’s that last line. Thank you for reading and commenting, I truly appreciate it… Beryl
Etgen-Baker Avatar
June 10, 2026 at 3:12 PM
great addition to Charles' 'stoner poem' - best wishes with this contest entry...sending hugs, Sara
Edmonds  Avatar
June 10, 2026 at 3:26 PM
Thank you Sara… Beryl
Buhagiar Avatar
June 10, 2026 at 1:48 AM
Beryl, that left me stoned. Great poem.
Edmonds  Avatar
June 10, 2026 at 2:01 AM
Thank you Victor, love your reply… Beryl
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