The Stench of Moldy Cheese

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Mark's Straight One-Rhymed Englyn Contest ~ June 30, 2025

Pungent scent plays on the breeze ~ what a stink! One I think, makes me sneeze Gagging with each breath, I wheeze Because of that moldy cheese!

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 7/4/2025 8:06:00 AM

Lin, really cute. I'm looking at this and thinking I need to organize a European excursion to sample all the various raw milk cheeses. They do this so much better than we do. Smiles. It's a way to preserve food that leads to all kinds of tastes!! Smiles!!

Deb M

Date: 7/1/2025 2:10:00 PM

I am a blue cheese hater ....how people put that in their mouth is beyond me haha!! Sorry Lin and Paul!! Debx

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 6/30/2025 9:28:00 PM

Hi Lin :-) Nice to read you! I love cheese, however, blue cheese is very nasty. I love Englyn poems :-)

Lin Lane
Date: 7/1/2025 10:33:00 AM

lol Abdullah. The blue looks nasty but it's a pungent cheese. This was my first Englyn poem, but I like the form, too.

Paul Willason

Date: 6/30/2025 5:32:00 PM

I'll have no bad words said about mouldy cheese thankyou....there is nothing better than a slice of "blue" on a cracker taken with a glass of red. Although it does stink out the fridge... Your gagging and wheezing however, my dear Lin, is an acceptable excuse. Love the poem. Cheers...I'm off to the fridge !

Lin Lane
Date: 6/30/2025 5:45:00 PM

Actually Paul, I love a good blue cheese in salads, on steak and with crackers and grapes! Thanks a lot!!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/30/2025 9:38:00 AM

"The Stench of Moldy Cheese" is a fun and creative write. Great Picture... Hope you have extra tissues. Hahaha!!! "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a fun day writing away........

Lin Lane
Date: 6/30/2025 5:43:00 PM

I have nothing against moldy cheese. Lol thanks Paula.