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The Statue

A hand of fine art
carving impressions of heart
beauty to embalm.
A creation glorified
inspiring while life denied.

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Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

May 22, 2019 at 4:41 PM

Very good description of the statue. Well done Besma. God bless you.

Besma Riabi Dziri

May 26, 2019 at 3:52 PM

Thank you so much, Allen, for your graceful presence and encouraging words.. my honour and pleasure.. Best regards and blessings.

Andrea Dietrich

November 6, 2018 at 6:22 PM

Excellent description of Statue. I really like this, Besma.

Besma Riabi Dziri

April 21, 2019 at 6:56 AM

My apologies preceding my deepest regards and gratitude to you, Andrea, for being so late to give you due respect for your uplifting praise and kind words.. my deepest regards and blessings.

Susan Ashley

November 2, 2018 at 1:06 PM

The exquisite creative beauty of your poem is breathtaking, my dear Besma, and breathes life in the ignited imagination of the beholder of your precious art - as your poem did in the imagination of this ardent reader. Your verses enrapture my mind, impassion my heart and satisfy my soul with their awe-inspiring wonder. A FAV! Warmest wishes, love and hugs my lovely friend.. ~Susan

Besma Riabi Dziri

November 5, 2018 at 2:08 PM

You do "breathe life" and wonder into my "Statue" dear Susan! Your words of evaluation, praise and veneration, are gems to keep into my heart and soul! A soul of wealth and depth I am deeply honoured to have as a dearest friend and a fellow poetess.. thank you so much for everything.. love and hugs.

Demetrios Trifiatis

October 27, 2018 at 7:00 AM

Incarnated poetry! Excellent dearest, Besma!

Besma Riabi Dziri

October 28, 2018 at 11:24 AM

Thank you so much dear Demetrios for your rewarding comment. A tremendous pleasure to read your profound and praising feedbacks! They add priceless value to my humble write. Stay in the light of Beauty.

Paul Callus

October 26, 2018 at 1:46 PM

Yes, Besma...some statues are so beautiful that all that's missing is the breath of life! Alas, they will never enjoy such an experience! ~ Blessings & regards // paul

Besma Riabi Dziri

October 28, 2018 at 11:21 AM

Every valuable feedback brings life to a work of art and delight to the artist.. thank you so much Paul for adding beauty to my humble write. My honour and pleasure. My deepest regards.

M. L. Kiser

October 20, 2018 at 2:12 PM

A rather magnificent piece of poetry; I like this:" beauty to embalm." Well done.

Besma Riabi Dziri

October 23, 2018 at 3:08 AM

My pleasure to have readers appreciate a work of art and heart! Deeply humbled M L. Kiser.. best regards. Stay blessed.

Vijay Pandit

October 18, 2018 at 10:57 AM

You bring the statue to life, Besma...wonderfully crafted..by a hand of fine art.

Besma Riabi Dziri

October 19, 2018 at 10:26 AM

In the realm of poetry everything is brought to life! Your gracious presence and uplifting feedback do bring my humble write to life! Thank you so much dear Vijay for your elevated and generous poetic soul.. my honour and pleasure, best regards. Be blessed always.

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