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The Start of Ascension

As I rise to the sky, My eyes open wide. As I fly, The clouds ask, "How?" The birds chirp, "Wow." The stars say "Why?" I do not reply. The clouds began to cry. The birds tell me to go high. And the stars whisper to me the time. To my surprise, they all began to harmonize. Their song is beautiful and I then realize, How long I've been delusional from all the lies. So my pride begins to fade and my wicked ways began to die.

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Date: 6/19/2022 1:29:00 PM
Love the rhyme and the message. Great form.
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Christopher Rodriguez
Date: 6/27/2022 12:03:00 PM
Thank you very much to take the time to comment. It's always a pleasure to have a comment on my poems. Thank you
Date: 6/15/2022 2:38:00 AM
Its an easy read and yet deep. Nice :)
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Christopher Rodriguez
Date: 6/15/2022 5:40:00 AM
Thank you that's what I was shooting for :-)

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