The Stars of the Underground

The stars that glimmer most, 
Are the stars often mistaken for stones
For they are not stones-
They are monuments of those past,
Who have worked to the bone, 
For masterment and marvel, 
For love unatoned.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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June 20, 2016 at 11:38 AM
What a succinct beauty you have here. The ones mistaken for stones are perhaps like agate ... where all the good stuff is hidden inside. I may be taking a different meaning here, but I can't help but think of the Underground Railroad, where people risked their lives to free slaves before and during the Civil War. In any case your message is a strong one ... very well expressed!
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June 21, 2016 at 12:26 AM
You are so kind, Timothy...you are perfectly on point with the underlying meaning, as per usual my dear friend. <3~Laura
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June 19, 2016 at 2:27 PM
Stars that burn for the sake of raw, firey beauty are like hearts that bloom for the instincts of love alone...this what your verse invokes in me Laura...J.A.B.
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June 21, 2016 at 12:23 AM
Thank you for your beautiful perspective, Justin. You always think so deeply, and I cherish your feedback. <3~Laura
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June 18, 2016 at 9:01 AM
Spell binding. Love the feel.
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June 18, 2016 at 6:55 PM
Thanks Scott. Just a little shorty to reflect on. These days I am in a dreamlike mood. Glad for your sweet visit. <3~Laura
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June 18, 2016 at 8:23 AM
WOWSERS!!! Love this one sweet Laura!!! "monuments of those past" Love, Jack xxx
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June 18, 2016 at 6:53 PM
Thank you Jack, for the gracious visit. I really appreciate the love. Hugs! <3~Laura
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