Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Poet Acrostic

The Stars In Your Eyes

S tars like pinpricks in the sky
T iny beads of light shining so high
A rranged in a way just so
I ntricately set, this we know
R emnant of a great explosion
W ild arrangements, was it really implosion?
A rrayed in what we see as confusion
Y et all placed just so without exclusion

T hought cannot take us there
O mniscient power our thoughts ensnare

T he stairs to the stars we can only seek
H allelujah, hear the cries from the meek
E luding our striving to catch them our chances weak

S tars that twinkle we cannot reach
T he barriers are there we cannot breach
A s we cannot reach stars in the skies
R each I can the stars in your eyes
S tars that are mine I beseech


Written by: Mandy Tams 20/02/2012

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Harry Horsman January 6, 2015 at 11:20 AM back again in your oldies, they just get better all the time,Mandy,,

Harry Horsman October 21, 2012 at 8:49 AM lovely and a very well construched poem, still poems down here on your list i am finding....good i hope there are more...

Joe Maverick February 28, 2012 at 5:06 PM Congrats on the win Mandy..)

Carol Sunshine Brown February 27, 2012 at 5:16 AM Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's "Stairway To The Stars" contest Mandy. Love Carol

Kash Poet February 26, 2012 at 6:44 AM I would have placed it higher Mandy.Very good Acrostic.Congrats on your win.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 25, 2012 at 4:14 PM Congrats Mandy on sweet success for this incredible entry luv.. thankxx for supporting too..luv..

Robert Pettit February 21, 2012 at 12:24 AM Mandy, you made all the pieces of the puzzle fit together nicely here.

Virginia Mitchell February 20, 2012 at 7:29 PM good luck in the contest :) Mandy Tams The Golden Girl February 21, 2012 at 12:04 AM Thank you Virginia xx

Andrea Dietrich February 20, 2012 at 5:00 PM oh, that is such a sweet ending the way you did the final stanza. Stars in the loved one's eyes , the ones you can reach. VERY lovely Mandy Tams The Golden Girl February 21, 2012 at 12:05 AM Thank you sweetie xx

Michael J. Falotico February 20, 2012 at 1:54 PM Nice work!!! You have me waiting for dark and a clear sky. Hugs Michael Mandy Tams The Golden Girl February 21, 2012 at 12:06 AM Nothing more beautiful. Thanks Micheal xx

Deb Wilson February 20, 2012 at 1:46 PM This is very beautiful Mandy...best of luck to you~~love,Deb Mandy Tams The Golden Girl February 21, 2012 at 12:06 AM Thanks Deb xx

Shirley Long February 20, 2012 at 12:31 PM well written poem, your verses are so captivating and I love the verses reach I can the stars in your eyes, stars that are mine I beseech. Mandy Tams The Golden Girl February 20, 2012 at 1:09 PM Aw thanks Shirley and for taking time to read and comment much appreciated xx

Mohammad Yamin February 20, 2012 at 11:11 AM An amazing Acrostic, Mandy. I am enchanted. The concluding lines have touched my heart most. -Mohammad Mandy Tams The Golden Girl February 20, 2012 at 11:33 AM Thank you Mohammad I appreciate your taking time to read and comment