The Stars Have Had It With Me

The Stars Have Had It with Me

Oh, No!
Orion came here last night in a fury!
And wow, he took me to task!
I cannot repeat the words he said to me.
Alas, not even is jest!

But he warned me, in a saturnine 
way, to grow rhapsodically!
And to stop using he and stars in the
constellation, so endlessly, poetically.

Oh, inside, I was quite choleric!
I tried in vain to explain, that stars
and even butterflies,
Are the bedrock of many poems.
Alas, not any sympathy was I shown!

At which point,Orion had it with me.
And in a kaleidoscopic mantle,disappeared!
With a shimmering gold dictionary and silvered thesaurus, Orion has left for me.
There...In the moonshine ever so gleaming
Under the arms of a loving evergreen tree.

I will follow Orion's advice 
Discover topics truly meaningful~
And put the word "stars" on ice!
Using English words, I hope...
That are truly lovely and purposeful.

Panagiota Romios
4/26/2019
10::30am PST
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Krutsinger Avatar
April 28, 2019 at 7:45 AM
Please do not put 'stars on ice' for too long, my friend; they are the ultimate diamonds.
Romios Avatar
April 28, 2019 at 7:55 AM
LOL...I like your Comnent PR
Cunningham Avatar
April 26, 2019 at 1:46 PM
Fear not Panagiota, there is plenty on earth to inspire you, the stars can wait. Tom
Romios Avatar
April 26, 2019 at 1:55 PM
Indded, there is. Thank you Tom. I write too much about them. I love them but not as a poetic crutch... Orion was right,Time to grow as a poet)) Do my homework, go for excellence, I may fall along the way..part of growing... Hugs.. Panagiota
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