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The Stars Have Had It With Me

The Stars Have Had It with Me Oh, No! Orion came here last night in a fury! And wow, he took me to task! I cannot repeat the words he said to me. Alas, not even is jest! But he warned me, in a saturnine way, to grow rhapsodically! And to stop using he and stars in the constellation, so endlessly, poetically. Oh, inside, I was quite choleric! I tried in vain to explain, that stars and even butterflies, Are the bedrock of many poems. Alas, not any sympathy was I shown! At which point,Orion had it with me. And in a kaleidoscopic mantle,disappeared! With a shimmering gold dictionary and silvered thesaurus, Orion has left for me. There...In the moonshine ever so gleaming Under the arms of a loving evergreen tree. I will follow Orion's advice Discover topics truly meaningful~ And put the word "stars" on ice! Using English words, I hope... That are truly lovely and purposeful. Panagiota Romios 4/26/2019 10::30am PST

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/28/2019 7:45:00 AM

Please do not put 'stars on ice' for too long, my friend; they are the ultimate diamonds.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 4/28/2019 7:55:00 AM

LOL...I like your Comnent PR

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/26/2019 1:46:00 PM

Fear not Panagiota, there is plenty on earth to inspire you, the stars can wait. Tom

Panagiota Romios
Date: 4/26/2019 1:55:00 PM

Indded, there is. Thank you Tom. I write too much about them. I love them but not as a poetic crutch... Orion was right,Time to grow as a poet)) Do my homework, go for excellence, I may fall along the way..part of growing... Hugs.. Panagiota