Elai Cee Poet Haiku

The Stars

The stars in the night
Giving light like a sunlight
Satisfy my heart

I want to reach you
Just to say something 'bout you
You are beautiful

Oh Looking at you
Remembering all my days
Hope he thinks me too

I know you're not gone
Come with me 'till the night come
Show your smile again

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Rev. Dr. Samuel Mack Oms Dd January 15, 2017 at 4:06 PM All poems of your I read lead me to the paintings you put forth and all the colors in which they provide such vived pictures I was drow into and the beauty of those pictures I thank you for the wonderful works and picture God's blessing lot of love and prayers to you always you are always in my heart and prayers

Poet Destroyer A July 29, 2014 at 5:47 PM Elai, stopping by to say hi... enjoying you haiku again...Linda

Abdulhafeez Oyewole May 30, 2013 at 11:10 AM A lovely star. Beautiful! AO Elai Cee June 1, 2013 at 12:47 AM thanks AO

Edward Orozco May 27, 2013 at 11:23 PM Beautiful write! I enjoyed this very much. -edward Elai Cee May 29, 2013 at 1:15 AM thanks Edward!

Judy Konos May 24, 2013 at 8:56 AM Love it...enter the kissing in the rain contest if you have not done so.... Elai Cee May 24, 2013 at 9:06 AM well thank you for the recomendation JUdy

Toquyen Harrell May 14, 2013 at 10:21 PM Ah, I love it. Very innocently beautiful! Great job, Elai :) Elai Cee May 14, 2013 at 10:50 PM Thanks Harrel God bless you!

Rev. Dr. Samuel Mack Oms Dd May 7, 2013 at 6:04 AM - A very very beautiful haiku Elai it reminds me of one night in my first meeting of my wife I thank you very much for wonderful return to a time I need to visit a little more with my better half {my lovely wife} God bless and keep you in His arms Love it. Elai Cee May 9, 2013 at 11:00 AM thank you so much ReV SAMUEL MACK OMS. I am really happy to know it. God bless you too!

Bl Devnath May 6, 2013 at 1:20 PM Really beautiful haiku enjoyed. Loved always, bl Elai Cee May 26, 2013 at 9:04 AM thank you bl

Anne-Lise Andresen May 6, 2013 at 12:16 PM - A beautiful haiku Elai - thank you! - Very well written. - Welcome to P-S oup. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Elai Cee May 6, 2013 at 12:45 PM thanks anne lisse. im happy to see every comment u've shared to me!

Pace Ink-U-Script May 6, 2013 at 4:38 AM I love the emotions here in this beautiful write my friend. I'm sure he isn't gone and he's smiling right above you...enjoyed reading..And it's a pleasure having you visit my work..Thank you..regards INK-U-SCRIPT Elai Cee May 6, 2013 at 12:43 PM yah thank you!

Poet Destroyer A May 5, 2013 at 10:41 AM Elai, a nice way of satisfaction through the eyes of millions of stars. 4 wonderful haiku. Lovely, and romantic, and a hint of longing. The first was the most enjoyable imagery, however i enjoyed the way you end it with the comfort of a needed smile... thanks for the kind hi... always~ Linda Elai Cee May 5, 2013 at 10:48 AM thanks Linda, it helps me a lot!