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The Stars

The stars in the night
Giving light like a sunlight
Satisfy my heart

I want to reach you
Just to say something 'bout you
You are beautiful

Oh Looking at you
Remembering all my days
Hope he thinks me too

I know you're not gone
Come with me 'till the night come
Show your smile again

Copyright © Elai Cee | Year Posted 2013

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Rev. Dr. Samuel Mack Oms Dd Date: 1/15/2017 4:06:00 PM All poems of your I read lead me to the paintings you put forth and all the colors in which they provide such vived pictures I was drow into and the beauty of those pictures I thank you for the wonderful works and picture God's blessing lot of love and prayers to you always you are always in my heart and prayers Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 7/29/2014 5:47:00 PM Elai, stopping by to say hi... enjoying you haiku again...Linda Login to Reply

Abdulhafeez Oyewole Date: 5/30/2013 11:10:00 AM A lovely star. Beautiful! AO Login to Reply Elai Cee Date: 6/1/2013 12:47:00 AM thanks AO

Edward Orozco Date: 5/27/2013 11:23:00 PM Beautiful write! I enjoyed this very much. -edward Login to Reply Elai Cee Date: 5/29/2013 1:15:00 AM thanks Edward!

Judy Konos Date: 5/24/2013 8:56:00 AM Love it...enter the kissing in the rain contest if you have not done so.... Login to Reply Elai Cee Date: 5/24/2013 9:06:00 AM well thank you for the recomendation JUdy

Toquyen Harrell Date: 5/14/2013 10:21:00 PM Ah, I love it. Very innocently beautiful! Great job, Elai :) Login to Reply Elai Cee Date: 5/14/2013 10:50:00 PM Thanks Harrel God bless you!

Rev. Dr. Samuel Mack Oms Dd Date: 5/7/2013 6:04:00 AM - A very very beautiful haiku Elai it reminds me of one night in my first meeting of my wife I thank you very much for wonderful return to a time I need to visit a little more with my better half {my lovely wife} God bless and keep you in His arms Love it. Login to Reply Elai Cee Date: 5/9/2013 11:00:00 AM thank you so much ReV SAMUEL MACK OMS. I am really happy to know it. God bless you too!

Bl Devnath Date: 5/6/2013 1:20:00 PM Really beautiful haiku enjoyed. Loved always, bl Login to Reply Elai Cee Date: 5/26/2013 9:04:00 AM thank you bl

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/6/2013 12:16:00 PM - A beautiful haiku Elai - thank you! - Very well written. - Welcome to P-S oup. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Elai Cee Date: 5/6/2013 12:45:00 PM thanks anne lisse. im happy to see every comment u've shared to me!

Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 5/6/2013 4:38:00 AM I love the emotions here in this beautiful write my friend. I'm sure he isn't gone and he's smiling right above you...enjoyed reading..And it's a pleasure having you visit my work..Thank you..regards INK-U-SCRIPT Login to Reply Elai Cee Date: 5/6/2013 12:43:00 PM yah thank you!

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/5/2013 10:41:00 AM Elai, a nice way of satisfaction through the eyes of millions of stars. 4 wonderful haiku. Lovely, and romantic, and a hint of longing. The first was the most enjoyable imagery, however i enjoyed the way you end it with the comfort of a needed smile... thanks for the kind hi... always~ Linda Login to Reply Elai Cee Date: 5/5/2013 10:48:00 AM thanks Linda, it helps me a lot!