The Stars

If only the stars could talk
The world would shine as bright as they are
The world would be 
so innocent, so peaceful, so calm
and yet so beautiful 
not that the world isn't
but it would become more glorious, 
It would become extrodinary
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Agustin Avatar
April 28, 2025 at 10:11 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A  Avatar
January 23, 2016 at 10:50 PM
LYNN, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Always with LUV **SKAT**
Farese Avatar
December 4, 2011 at 7:43 AM
Beautiful :D
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