Notes About The Poem

The Starry Night, 1889, Vincent Van Gogh

in need of breeze
beyond the noise,
       seconds slither
through veined currents,
smothering the light within,
as silence forgets
the syllables of stillness
turning the sky
into a sea of electric blue ~
waves carrying
the weight of quiet grief,
restless ripples
pushing...pulling...
toward the swirls 
of love
etched beneath 
           the midnight sun…

and if tomorrow I f a d e
intrinsic ink phase, 
remember me as the dusk
that defied
treacherous tremors of dark ~ 
I gathered sparks 
        from spiraling stars
as constellations
shattered and crashed
against shivering skin
within this sleepless home,
carving a sapphire silhouette
of solitude ~
a poet drowning
in a demented dream
in the heart of
an unnamed village, 
no soul of dawn longed to see,
unaware of heaven
hidden beneath 
      brush-bruised strokes,
where only a 
     feeler’s eyes
could trace the 
fine feathers
f l o a t i n g through
         the finesse
                            of a forlorn life…
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Kendrick Avatar
March 13, 2026 at 4:52 PM
Congratulations on your winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Sara K
Rodgers Avatar
March 11, 2026 at 8:05 PM
Dear Empress, I love Van Gogh and actually saw this painting in Paris at the Dorset. What a stunning way to describe the physical violence of Vincent’s technique, a record of a body in conflict with its own light. I was particularly moved by the idea of the poet "drowning in a demented dream" while the village below remains unaware of the "heaven hidden" right above their steeples. You’ve captured the tragic irony of The Starry Night. By framing yourself as the "dusk that defied treacherous tremors," you’ve turned the act of observing his art into a shared moment of survival. I think I felt the entire experience. A Fav at multiple levels. Blessings, Dear Empress, Daniel
Winter Avatar
March 9, 2026 at 3:02 AM
Wonderfully penned, loved the way you wrote it! I missed your presence here on POTD! Great to see you back! Love, Anne
Winter Avatar
March 9, 2026 at 3:01 AM
Wonderfully penned, loved the way you wrote it! I missed your presence here on POTD! Great to see you back! Love, Anne
Empress Avatar
March 9, 2026 at 9:35 AM
Awwn thank you beautiful soul, I remember you and your kindness, truly im grateful for your support sigh! Sending you light always
Hind Avatar
March 8, 2026 at 11:05 PM
wonderful poem on this painting, dear Ink <3 it's good to see you post again, I will see what other magic you are coming up with
Empress Avatar
March 9, 2026 at 9:34 AM
Awwn thank you! I try. I like the quietness. Sending you light always! Your presence is magical
G  Avatar
March 8, 2026 at 11:01 AM
Congratulations my podium sharing friend <3
Empress Avatar
March 9, 2026 at 9:34 AM
Yeayy! High five! Hahah
DiMino Avatar
March 8, 2026 at 7:36 AM
"and if tomorrow I f a d e intrinsic ink phase, remember me as the dusk that defied" -- lovely original poetry! "where only a feeler’s eyes could trace the fine feathers f l o a t i n g through the finesse of a forlorn life…" -- the price for deeply, honestly seeking. Wonderful write!
Empress Avatar
March 9, 2026 at 9:33 AM
Thank you for always leaving such soulful comments dear Joe, i Appreciate you reading me and supporting me truly. Sending you light always
Loving Iii Avatar
March 7, 2026 at 3:41 PM
Putting this with the painting was easy.
Empress Avatar
March 9, 2026 at 9:20 AM
Thank you so much for saying so, i appreciate it. Sending you light always.
Cunningham Avatar
March 7, 2026 at 12:28 PM
Love your interpretation of the painting IE. You've brought it to life. Tom
Empress Avatar
March 9, 2026 at 9:16 AM
Thank you so very much dear Tom, for being here always! Appreciate your kind support truly. Sending you light always
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 7, 2026 at 11:53 AM
Heya Ink, A Supernova-like Ekphrasis capturing the mood and tumultuous scene of Vincent’s Starry Night, (unaware of heaven hidden beneath) the poor guy probably felt that way towards the end of his forlorn life, but what a legacy he left behind! A beautiful piece of work, cheers David
Empress Avatar
March 9, 2026 at 9:14 AM
Thank you so very much dear David, your comments are always so deeply moving, im grateful for your generous support and warm presence. Sending you light always
Bordner Avatar
March 7, 2026 at 11:48 AM
Spittle of the Seer smeared into starlight silent, weathered heartbeats giving no remorse to ephemeral epiphanies that echo the ageless eurythmics of God, the paint of Life settles into the skin of Death's sympathy, the color of my night a poetry eternal to love...J.A.B. You have produced another masterpiece Poetess, Vincent would be elated by your quill.
Empress Avatar
March 9, 2026 at 9:14 AM
Thats a beautiful and so soulful response to my poem dear Justin. Your kindness is truly appreciated, i feel seen and understood! Sending you light always
Liguori Avatar
March 7, 2026 at 5:24 AM
‘and if tomorrow I f a d e’… you will never fade with words like these. Wonderful.
Empress Avatar
March 9, 2026 at 9:13 AM
Thank you for saying so dear Robert, appreciate your selfless support and sincere kindness. Sending you light always
Onpaper Avatar
March 7, 2026 at 3:27 AM
breath beyond the noise,.. mmmmmmm.. waves carrying the weight of quiet grief, restless ripples pushing...pulling... the emotions running through out this piece is exquisitely heavy… soo very gorgeously written papi.. it’s like reading live art !!! Every flow makes you hold a breath… absolutely divine!
Empress Avatar
March 9, 2026 at 9:12 AM
Awwn thank you papi! Appreciate you always
G  Avatar
March 7, 2026 at 3:26 AM
Beautiful! Bravo! I love it! "f l o a t i n g through the finesse of a forlorn life" - amazing! Your word choices are divine for Van Gogh - veined, smothering, defied, no soul of dawn - what?! So good! Fave
Empress Avatar
March 9, 2026 at 9:12 AM
Thank you so much for the fave and for the compliments. Truly grateful always my friend! Sending you light always
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