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While we walked home from the movies, one moonlit starry night, My friends and I talked and laughed, enjoying summer's delights. The streets were quite silent, as trees swayed in warm breezes, And night blooms graced the walks, like evening's masterpieces! The birds were still singing, and jeweled fireflies were out, Winking off and on magically, in the temporary world blackout! We had stopped for ice cream, and ate our cones as we walked, In the middle of the evening, as drowsy summertime sleepwalked. As we were passing a park, we sat upon a stone bench as we ate; And reveled in the subtle magic, that warm nights often create. As I gazed at the starry sky, it suddenly went totally black; And the moon had also disappeared, as if it wasn't coming back! I called my friends' attention, to this most fantastic sight; But they asked what I meant, for to them all seemed to be right. So I could only conclude, we were experiencing different truths, As life looks different in old age, than it did in our youths! So I went back to conversing, for there was nothing else to do, As a redbird must go on flying, in sunny skies sapphire blue! But the skies suddenly reddened, as if they had caught on fire, With none to extinguish the blaze, although the need was dire! My gay friends kept on talking, for they hadn't noticed a thing, Like skies after a thunderstorm, when gold sunshine is smiling. Later the skies darkened again, until they were a satiny black. It seemed I'd witnessed the big bang, which should never be back! Then I looked up and saw a single star, but I kept it to myself, Like fervent secret wishes, that are kept hidden upon a shelf. And as I still gazed upwards, another star appeared and another, Like bright twinkling children, following the twinkling mother. I was not the least bit frightened, but rather quite thrilled, At the concise history lesson, of how a great void was filled! So as not to alarm my friends, I spoke a comment now and then. They hadn't noted my agitation, at a past that had come again. The stars just kept appearing, until a black night was studded, As sparkling jewels amid rainbows, which prior to storm was hid. Then came another gorgeous sight, on this dark night of wonders- Hued nebulae began coming in view, singly like a game of numbers! My friends still sat and talked, they were having so much fun, Unaware that their pal had received, a gift of solitary vision. But I laughed when they laughed, with at times a casual comment, As though I was conversing, in a sweet dream that I had dreamt! The new-old stars kept shining, and the nebulae charmed the night; And before much time had elapsed, the first galaxy came in sight! Soon more galaxies followed, as though to the beat of the drum, As to steadfast beat of summer, peachy rosebuds soon will come. Later came red planet Mars and others, so lovely and mysterious, As the night birds sang hauntingly, in green woodlands so plush. Then last but surely not least, appeared our pale friend moon, Like the notes to a beautiful song, that will not end too soon. A star studded show was over, and we walked home in starlight, I with the undying memory, of all that had happened that night. And if I were only braver, I'd tell the whole world what I saw, Upon the official witness stand, in a most venerable court of law!

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Date: 12/17/2020 7:57:00 AM
Evelyn, "Then I looked up and saw a single star, but I kept it to myself, Like fervent secret wishes, that are kept hidden upon a shelf." You are my favorite witness to the stars. -Richard
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Date: 12/17/2020 10:08:00 AM
That is very nice to know, Richard. Thank you so much.
Date: 12/9/2020 6:36:00 PM
Wow Evelyn! What a story! Gorgeous images! Looking forward to reading more by you!
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Date: 12/9/2020 9:52:00 PM
Thank you, Jennifer. I'm so glad! :=)
Date: 12/4/2020 4:29:00 PM
And here you speak to the world...your true mystic vision. I believe every word. You were very blessed. Thanks be to God. It is good, however, to guard your vision’s voice. You are right...appreciation and understanding is only given to a few. Read Thomas Merton and R. Rohr about Mystic life. Hugs! sallyEJH
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Date: 12/4/2020 8:47:00 PM
Thank you for all your kind words, Sally. I will read those books with great interest. Thank you for the recommendation. Hugs and best wishes, Evelyn
Date: 12/2/2020 10:08:00 AM
Aesthetic! Congratulations on your well deserved win
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Date: 12/2/2020 3:12:00 PM
Thank you, Paghunda. :=)
Date: 12/1/2020 8:36:00 PM
Somehow, I missed your receiving POTD for this gem, Evelyn. Well-deserved, my friend! Write on! Justice and Righteousness, Gershon
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Date: 12/1/2020 9:15:00 PM
It's never too late, Gershon. Thank you very much. The eyes have it, Evelyn :=)
Date: 11/30/2020 2:36:00 AM
- A wonderful p.o.t.d., Evelyn :) - Congratulations :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/30/2020 9:11:00 AM
Thank you very much, Anne-Lise. Hugs and blessings. :=)
Date: 11/30/2020 12:08:00 AM
What a delightful and imaginative vision you write of, Evelyn. So amazing would be that vision that I hope you would tell the world. You are a bright star here at Poetry Soup, I can tell you that! My hearty congratulations for POTD on this beauty, I hope you fully enjoy the honor ~ John
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Date: 11/30/2020 9:09:00 AM
I have enjoyed the honor-very much so, John. I extend my heartfelt thanks to you, for your many kind words. Have a nice day, my friend. :)
Date: 11/29/2020 6:10:00 PM
I love everything about Space. The moon circling around us, like a Halo. Stars brightly guiding the way. Your thoughts are so beautiful and uplifting. Congratulations Evelyn, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
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Date: 11/29/2020 7:12:00 PM
Please accept my profound thanks, Brandy. :)
Date: 11/29/2020 5:58:00 PM
A wonderful poem, Evelyn. Congratulations on winning Poem of the Day :)
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Date: 11/29/2020 7:11:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Angela. :)
Date: 11/29/2020 5:05:00 PM
Evelyn this is a brilliant poem my friend , very creative and imaginative - you were definitely the one with logic in this scenario. Hugs and blessings and congratulation on the honor of being awarded POTD, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 11/29/2020 5:25:00 PM
Thank you for the lovely compliments and congratulations, Jennifer. Hugs and blessings, Evelyn.
Date: 11/29/2020 4:54:00 PM
This is a delight, Evelyn. You have such a gift for telling a story in couplets and colors! I love this tender retelling of your summer experience! I could literally feel the summer night. Congratulations on your POTD! Sending you blessings of the season and seeing a new star!
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Date: 11/29/2020 5:22:00 PM
Your words bring joy, Sam. Thank you so much for your many kind words and blessings. Blessings of the Holiday season to you, my friend.
Date: 11/29/2020 3:28:00 PM
WoW! Evelyn, This stunning and beautiful! I enjoyed the view. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved. Have a nice day:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/29/2020 5:18:00 PM
Thank you for your warm words and congratulations, Alexis. Have a nice evening, my friend. :=)
Date: 11/29/2020 1:51:00 PM
I have a hunch you are more intelligent than the friends you were with.
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Date: 11/29/2020 2:54:00 PM
Thank you for the nice comment, Hannah.
Date: 11/29/2020 9:49:00 AM
Beautiful story, Evelyn, and congratulations on POTD...
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Date: 11/29/2020 2:47:00 PM
Thank you for your appreciation, Akkina. It means so much. :)
Date: 11/29/2020 9:38:00 AM
Evelyn, this is a fascinating read. I loved the structure of the poem, the imagery, and the wonderment of it all. A precious POTD! Congratulations!
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Date: 11/29/2020 2:44:00 PM
I extend my deepest thanks for the nice things you've said. Have a wonderful evening, my friend. :=)
Date: 11/29/2020 8:23:00 AM
Thank you for this journey through the stars on a beautiful summer night Evelyn. Congratulations on having your awesome poem honored with POTD! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 11/29/2020 8:33:00 AM
Thank you for your delightful expression of appreciation, Connie. Blessings xxoo
Date: 11/29/2020 8:02:00 AM
So glad you got POTD for this one, an epic story with couplets... Congrats.
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Date: 11/29/2020 8:31:00 AM
Many thanks, Silent One.
Date: 11/29/2020 5:27:00 AM
My congrats for your POTD. ~~
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Date: 11/29/2020 8:30:00 AM
Thank you, Victor. :=)
Date: 11/29/2020 5:22:00 AM
I so enjoyed this intriguing read, it was like reading a story straight from a dream, what an adventure, what a wonderful write. Congratulations Evelyn on poem of the day.. Belle
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Date: 11/29/2020 8:29:00 AM
Please accept my humble thanks. :=)
Date: 11/29/2020 5:16:00 AM
Beautiful story Evelyn--congrats on poem of the day.
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Date: 11/29/2020 8:27:00 AM
I thank you most sincerely.
Date: 11/29/2020 5:07:00 AM
Awesome, congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 11/29/2020 8:26:00 AM
Thank you so much.
Date: 11/29/2020 5:07:00 AM
I can see you writing this on take-1...A vivid imagination...Congratulations Evelyn Judy Buehier on POTD
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Date: 11/29/2020 8:25:00 AM
Many thanks for a lovely comment, Arturo. :=)
Date: 11/29/2020 5:06:00 AM
Your star witness is amazing Evelyn.. and it's truly a gift of solitary vision.... and I can relate to this... sometimes what we observe with a matured mind may not appear to be the same to those who had not reached that state of mind. I loved this...'bright twinkling children following the twinkling mother'. Congrats on your POTD. ~ Ani
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Date: 11/29/2020 8:24:00 AM
Please accept my deepest thanks for your insightful and heartwarming remarks. :=)
Date: 11/29/2020 1:42:00 AM
Enjoyed your fantasy tale Evelyn, congratulations on POTD. Enjoy the honour. Tom
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Date: 11/29/2020 8:22:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words and congratulations, Tom. :)
Date: 11/28/2020 7:48:00 PM
Your adventure-fantasy writes are just 'out of this world,' Evelyn! Wonderful and enchanting! ~ Light of Creation, Gershon
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Date: 11/28/2020 10:09:00 PM
Thank you for the fine compliment, Gershon. I'm so glad you liked it! ~ Re-creation, Evelyn
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