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The Star of Our Universe

Isn't the brilliant sun the star of our Universe? Doesn't it rise at sunrise and brightens clouds? The sun is a life-giver, it nourishes with its warm rays everything beneath this sky... be grateful as I!

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Date: 2/28/2014 12:06:00 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in Giorgio A.V. contest !!! - A well written poem, Andrew. - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/28/2014 9:01:00 AM
Very impressive poem. Congrats on the win, andrew
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Date: 2/28/2014 8:54:00 AM
Congrats Andrew on the win . A brilliant one indeed.
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