The Star of Our Universe

Isn't the brilliant sun the star
of our Universe? Doesn't it rise
at sunrise and brightens clouds?


The sun is a life-giver,
it nourishes with its warm rays
everything beneath this sky...
be grateful as I!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Andresen Avatar
February 28, 2014 at 12:06 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in Giorgio A.V. contest !!! - A well written poem, Andrew. - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Mehta Avatar
February 28, 2014 at 9:01 AM
Very impressive poem. Congrats on the win, andrew
Kayode Avatar
February 28, 2014 at 8:54 AM
Congrats Andrew on the win . A brilliant one indeed.
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