Kabuteng P.Ink K. Poet Tetractys

The Staircase of a Soupy Addict

Soup
       log in
           feel the rush
                    of poetry
                           smiles to laughter…friends…words that brighten day

                                                                          Shucks, system error, page takes forever
                                                                       upside down U
                                                                 is my mouth
                                                             no dice…
                                                        sighs 







---nikko :)
for Michael's Smiles and frowns contest ;)

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...ok, ok addict logging out-- in a bit,,,hahahaha

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Elizabeth Wesley September 7, 2011 at 9:44 PM Too clever, both the words and the format - gives me a smile to see something like this.

Elizabeth Wesley August 14, 2011 at 6:37 PM Isn't it true Nikko, I wonder whaat we would do without our Soup. It's wonderful to have the interaction with all the friends we make here and I love your verse that describes it so perfectly.

July 30, 2011 at 8:13 PM Loved the artistic format. You have me smiling with this one. So creative. Best wishes in the contest. Karen

James Fraser July 27, 2011 at 1:52 PM Ha ha, you made me chuckle and sigh all at once here Nikko. We do tend to become addicted to the Soup as it's such a wonderful site. You guessed correctly Nikko, Chaiten is indeed a volcano in Chile, well done. Thank you kindly for your always kind words :)

Jesu Johnson July 26, 2011 at 8:53 PM I really enjoyed this poem!!!!! Thank you friend for your kind comment!!!!!

Carolyn Devonshire July 25, 2011 at 2:17 PM Congratulations on your win, Nikko! You're right, Soup is a hard addiction to break. Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown July 25, 2011 at 9:58 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Michael's "Smiles and Frowns" contest Nikko. Love, Carol

Michael Hornschuch July 24, 2011 at 10:36 AM Nikko, I love this subject! I was just speaking to a 'friend' on here the other day about my resentment toward him for introducing me to this site, (it's his fault!!) I was wondering, have you heard of any Poetry Soup 12 step programs yet??? LMAO great write Nikko

David Williams July 24, 2011 at 10:07 AM hey Nikko, congrats on a very creative win, David

Amanda Moore July 24, 2011 at 12:30 AM Very creative a top notch winner!

Matthew Anish July 23, 2011 at 3:37 PM Computers are a boon - but as you show in this poem they can be a pain as well. Nice job! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Matthew Anish July 23, 2011 at 3:37 PM Computers are a boon - but as you show in this poem they can be a pain as well. Nice job! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 23, 2011 at 3:18 PM Congrats sweet friend Nikko on a special second place for a special piece luv.. enjoy top spot..oh..hot hot hot here..105 today ...in the shade...

Jack Horne July 23, 2011 at 3:16 PM LOL, this clever piece made me smile : )

Andrea Dietrich July 23, 2011 at 11:39 AM hahahaha, yours is SO unique. WOW. Way to go, Nikko. A big congrats on your well deserved win. LUv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta July 23, 2011 at 10:49 AM My congratulations on the Second place win in the contest of Michael, nikko

Black Eyed Susan July 23, 2011 at 10:29 AM good one! very clever! congratulations on your win :)

Carol Sunshine Brown July 22, 2011 at 7:15 AM Happy weekend and thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us once again Nikko. I am going to try and write some entries for the contests this weekend also. It is still so hot and humid here but we might get some relief next week. Wishing you a weekend filled with joy and inspiration. Love, Carol

Kevin Clark July 22, 2011 at 5:58 AM LOL very funny and true. Nice write

Kash Poet July 22, 2011 at 2:56 AM This one is going to be a chart topper Nikko.Very creative write with brilliance.Enjoyed very much.

Carolyn Devonshire July 21, 2011 at 3:04 PM LOL Very creative, Nikko. So are you once again a Soup addict? It's hard to stay away, isn't it? Love your entry for Michael's contest and wish you success. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 21, 2011 at 2:34 PM certainly creative.. ultimately TRUE .. brilliantly designed .. elegantly penned.. did I leave any stone unturned? haha.. great one sweet friend Nikko... good luck in the contest... as one 'addicted poet' to another... bravo..luv..

Wilma Neels July 21, 2011 at 11:54 AM oops :D i forgot something hehe Kabuteng P.Ink K. July 21, 2011 at 11:57 AM what did you forget?? ok ok I am going!!!zzzzz

Wilma Neels July 21, 2011 at 11:53 AM Err you had to use the word staircase hey? Lol now I am off to la la land with loads of smiles.. All the best for Michael's contest Missy ;) *mwahugs* Kabuteng P.Ink K. July 21, 2011 at 12:03 PM by the why not I meant that stairs are my friends, mwah, mwah, mwah :D--ok bye for real--yeeks I am looking crazy here-- I am not sleepy that's why-- sigh ok ok counting sheep now (haha I don't really do that) O_o shucks haha system thing again urrgh Kabuteng P.Ink K. July 21, 2011 at 11:57 AM haha yeah, it was a burst of inspiration actually when I posted it, I said, hmm why not?? lol-- wow, at least somebody's sleeping early! ok I better go head on to lala land myself ;)