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The Staircase of a Soupy Addict

Soup
       log in
           feel the rush
                    of poetry
                           smiles to laughter…friends…words that brighten day

                                                                          Shucks, system error, page takes forever
                                                                       upside down U
                                                                 is my mouth
                                                             no dice…
                                                        sighs 







---nikko :)
for Michael's Smiles and frowns contest ;)

07222011224a230
...ok, ok addict logging out-- in a bit,,,hahahaha

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Elizabeth Wesley Date: 9/7/2011 9:44:00 PM Too clever, both the words and the format - gives me a smile to see something like this. Login to Reply

Elizabeth Wesley Date: 8/14/2011 6:37:00 PM Isn't it true Nikko, I wonder whaat we would do without our Soup. It's wonderful to have the interaction with all the friends we make here and I love your verse that describes it so perfectly. Login to Reply

Date: 7/30/2011 8:13:00 PM Loved the artistic format. You have me smiling with this one. So creative. Best wishes in the contest. Karen Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 7/27/2011 1:52:00 PM Ha ha, you made me chuckle and sigh all at once here Nikko. We do tend to become addicted to the Soup as it's such a wonderful site. You guessed correctly Nikko, Chaiten is indeed a volcano in Chile, well done. Thank you kindly for your always kind words :) Login to Reply

Jesu Johnson Date: 7/26/2011 8:53:00 PM I really enjoyed this poem!!!!! Thank you friend for your kind comment!!!!! Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 7/25/2011 2:17:00 PM Congratulations on your win, Nikko! You're right, Soup is a hard addiction to break. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 7/25/2011 9:58:00 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Michael's "Smiles and Frowns" contest Nikko. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Michael Hornschuch Date: 7/24/2011 10:36:00 AM Nikko, I love this subject! I was just speaking to a 'friend' on here the other day about my resentment toward him for introducing me to this site, (it's his fault!!) I was wondering, have you heard of any Poetry Soup 12 step programs yet??? LMAO great write Nikko Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 7/24/2011 10:07:00 AM hey Nikko, congrats on a very creative win, David Login to Reply

Amanda Moore Date: 7/24/2011 12:30:00 AM Very creative a top notch winner! Login to Reply

Matthew Anish Date: 7/23/2011 3:37:00 PM Computers are a boon - but as you show in this poem they can be a pain as well. Nice job! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish Login to Reply

Matthew Anish Date: 7/23/2011 3:37:00 PM Computers are a boon - but as you show in this poem they can be a pain as well. Nice job! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 7/23/2011 3:18:00 PM Congrats sweet friend Nikko on a special second place for a special piece luv.. enjoy top spot..oh..hot hot hot here..105 today ...in the shade... Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 7/23/2011 3:16:00 PM LOL, this clever piece made me smile : ) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/23/2011 11:39:00 AM hahahaha, yours is SO unique. WOW. Way to go, Nikko. A big congrats on your well deserved win. LUv, Andrea Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 7/23/2011 10:49:00 AM My congratulations on the Second place win in the contest of Michael, nikko Login to Reply

Black Eyed Susan Date: 7/23/2011 10:29:00 AM good one! very clever! congratulations on your win :) Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 7/22/2011 7:15:00 AM Happy weekend and thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us once again Nikko. I am going to try and write some entries for the contests this weekend also. It is still so hot and humid here but we might get some relief next week. Wishing you a weekend filled with joy and inspiration. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Kevin Clark Date: 7/22/2011 5:58:00 AM LOL very funny and true. Nice write Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 7/22/2011 2:56:00 AM This one is going to be a chart topper Nikko.Very creative write with brilliance.Enjoyed very much. Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 7/21/2011 3:04:00 PM LOL Very creative, Nikko. So are you once again a Soup addict? It's hard to stay away, isn't it? Love your entry for Michael's contest and wish you success. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 7/21/2011 2:34:00 PM certainly creative.. ultimately TRUE .. brilliantly designed .. elegantly penned.. did I leave any stone unturned? haha.. great one sweet friend Nikko... good luck in the contest... as one 'addicted poet' to another... bravo..luv.. Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 7/21/2011 11:54:00 AM oops :D i forgot something hehe Login to Reply Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 7/21/2011 11:57:00 AM what did you forget?? ok ok I am going!!!zzzzz

Wilma Neels Date: 7/21/2011 11:53:00 AM Err you had to use the word staircase hey? Lol now I am off to la la land with loads of smiles.. All the best for Michael's contest Missy ;) *mwahugs* Login to Reply Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 7/21/2011 12:03:00 PM by the why not I meant that stairs are my friends, mwah, mwah, mwah :D--ok bye for real--yeeks I am looking crazy here-- I am not sleepy that's why-- sigh ok ok counting sheep now (haha I don't really do that) O_o shucks haha system thing again urrgh Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 7/21/2011 11:57:00 AM haha yeah, it was a burst of inspiration actually when I posted it, I said, hmm why not?? lol-- wow, at least somebody's sleeping early! ok I better go head on to lala land myself ;)