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The St Ives Woman

On the right of the screen is this St. Ives ad. That young brunette there doesn’t look half bad. Every once in a while, she pops up there. She smiles while wearing only her underwear. That young lady looks young, and quite able. She has the best pair of legs since Betty Grable. I have only two more lines left to rhyme. She can pop up on my screen at any time.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/25/2011 4:48:00 PM
ha! this one made me laugh. i never noticed this ad - i think it would be noticed much more by a man, though (no offense!). ~ thanks for catching a typo on one of my poems. much obliged.............
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Date: 12/25/2011 1:50:00 PM
Yes, I do know what ad your are speaking of! It does capture my attention for second...can't believe they have something like that here! Ah yes, she is attractive though, however I just can't believe her partial nudity is allowed! Your write describes her quite well and her beauty is envisioned here too! Very well written rhyme scheme Robert!! Awesome Work!!
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Date: 12/25/2011 9:33:00 AM
Hey, a rhyme on one of these pop up ads. VERy clever, Robert. The day is here, but I don't have anyone coming until 4 p.m!! and hubbie is sleeping in! Hope you are having a good day. Andrea
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Date: 12/25/2011 8:50:00 AM
It might be fun looking there, and yes we all have a pair, it might not be too big a suprise, arrow point up ^are her eyes. lol Merry christmas Robert. love the write.~Lisa
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Date: 12/25/2011 8:43:00 AM
Ht stuff here! Do you have her number? Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 12/25/2011 5:04:00 AM
Hi Robert, thank you for your kind words. None of my poems take very long to write, because I don't know much about poetry - I just write it! Merry Christmas! Cheers, Maureen
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Date: 12/24/2011 11:58:00 PM
A very clever poem and quite entertaining! Thanks a mill for the uplifting comments on my poetry! Have a wonderful week! Always, Laura
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