The St Ives Woman

On the right of the screen is this St. Ives ad. That young brunette there doesn’t look half bad. Every once in a while, she pops up there. She smiles while wearing only her underwear. That young lady looks young, and quite able. She has the best pair of legs since Betty Grable. I have only two more lines left to rhyme. She can pop up on my screen at any time.
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Bauer Avatar
December 25, 2011 at 4:48 PM
ha! this one made me laugh. i never noticed this ad - i think it would be noticed much more by a man, though (no offense!). ~ thanks for catching a typo on one of my poems. much obliged.............
Sivey Avatar
December 25, 2011 at 1:50 PM
Yes, I do know what ad your are speaking of! It does capture my attention for second...can't believe they have something like that here! Ah yes, she is attractive though, however I just can't believe her partial nudity is allowed! Your write describes her quite well and her beauty is envisioned here too! Very well written rhyme scheme Robert!! Awesome Work!!
Dietrich Avatar
December 25, 2011 at 9:33 AM
Hey, a rhyme on one of these pop up ads. VERy clever, Robert. The day is here, but I don't have anyone coming until 4 p.m!! and hubbie is sleeping in! Hope you are having a good day. Andrea
Cooper Avatar
December 25, 2011 at 8:50 AM
It might be fun looking there, and yes we all have a pair, it might not be too big a suprise, arrow point up ^are her eyes. lol Merry christmas Robert. love the write.~Lisa
Anish Avatar
December 25, 2011 at 8:43 AM
Ht stuff here! Do you have her number? Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Lefanue Avatar
December 25, 2011 at 5:04 AM
Hi Robert, thank you for your kind words. None of my poems take very long to write, because I don't know much about poetry - I just write it! Merry Christmas! Cheers, Maureen
Breidenthal Avatar
December 24, 2011 at 11:58 PM
A very clever poem and quite entertaining! Thanks a mill for the uplifting comments on my poetry! Have a wonderful week! Always, Laura
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