Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

The Spring Rain

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                                         The spring rain
                                  Stirs my senses__my gain
                           Soft pit-a-patter music__wind chimes
            The pit-a-patter brings to my mind poems, lines, rhymes
              Saturated by these scents_sounds in the spring times
                            Soft tender fig gives off scent again
                                     Wisteria wafts twain
                                         The Spring Rain



(Trois Par Huit...No catergory with this name..)

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Rhia Madison Thomer November 4, 2010 at 12:44 PM creative piece this one is. i very much love the rain, and the images in this piece are great. never seen this style before but i find it quite enjoyable. thank you for this addition to soup. --Madison

Duncan Chappell October 29, 2010 at 1:44 AM wow thank you for sharing duncan

James Peranteau October 18, 2010 at 1:58 PM Doesn't need a catergory...it's one in itself ! I smell the hybrids on your slip ! Great write Sara...much love, james

Diane Locksley October 18, 2010 at 1:43 PM I never saw this form before, but I love the images in the poem, Sara. You're one of my favorite writers, too. Take care and thanks for your kind words of encouragement, Diane

Kevin Semeniuk October 18, 2010 at 12:04 PM beautiful poetry! you always have such a great approach to writing with your images and over all layout! niice work!

Robert Ball October 18, 2010 at 8:11 AM Sara you are a great poet in your own right and anytime you want to use any of my poems to share the word of our Lord Jesus Christ, you not need ask,of course you have my permission always' God bless you and yours and keep up your great writings you are one of my fav's. Robert A. Ball

Carolyn Devonshire October 18, 2010 at 6:31 AM Beautiful description of the mood that accompanies the welcome spring rain, Sara. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 17, 2010 at 9:06 PM Very nice imagery Sara.. and a fine form luv.. rain has sparked me to write also as my previous post .. luv when its calm and rains..not all that wind and mess ... my fairy wings on porch are still reeling from last episode..luv.. hope u are well..

Andrea Dietrich October 17, 2010 at 8:25 PM VEry very nice, Sara, I thought it might be for the sound/smell contest for its great imagery!

John Rhinem October 17, 2010 at 7:35 PM Smile ~ "Wisteria wafts twain." ~ I love this verse & I also love the sounds of mesmerizings chimes &, I love the softness amid beautiful images born within this gloriously precious poe "My Dear, 'Lovely & Precious Sara Kendrick!!!'" ~ "A Fave; 'Very Beautiful'" ~ Hope "You" are well &, "My Love & warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love," John! ~ Smile, "Beautiful Dreams;" Bye!:) ~

Michael Benkhen October 17, 2010 at 3:29 PM I like it!

Dr.Ram Mehta October 17, 2010 at 3:15 PM Very nice attempt to write Trois Par Huit, instead a mixer. Nice feelings and emotions on the Spring rain, Sara

Joe Maverick October 17, 2010 at 1:54 PM liked this write, flows well and gives off inspration.

Debbie Guzzi October 17, 2010 at 12:51 PM soft and lovely like the spring, I hope you and yours are well? Light & Love (favorite line "The pit-a-patter brings to my mind poems, lines, rhymes")

Doris Culverhouse October 17, 2010 at 12:50 PM enjoyed...ready for spring too?

James Fraser October 17, 2010 at 12:38 PM This is delightful Sara, and the Springs rains are so welcome > have a lovely Sunday >> James :)

Kim Hilliker October 17, 2010 at 12:16 PM A pretty write, Sara.