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The Spring Rain

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                                         The spring rain
                                  Stirs my senses__my gain
                           Soft pit-a-patter music__wind chimes
            The pit-a-patter brings to my mind poems, lines, rhymes
              Saturated by these scents_sounds in the spring times
                            Soft tender fig gives off scent again
                                     Wisteria wafts twain
                                         The Spring Rain



(Trois Par Huit...No catergory with this name..)

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Rhia Madison Thomer

Date: 11/4/2010 12:44:00 PM

creative piece this one is. i very much love the rain, and the images in this piece are great. never seen this style before but i find it quite enjoyable. thank you for this addition to soup. --Madison

Duncan Chappell

Date: 10/29/2010 1:44:00 AM

wow thank you for sharing duncan

James Peranteau

Date: 10/18/2010 1:58:00 PM

Doesn't need a catergory...it's one in itself ! I smell the hybrids on your slip ! Great write Sara...much love, james

Diane Locksley

Date: 10/18/2010 1:43:00 PM

I never saw this form before, but I love the images in the poem, Sara. You're one of my favorite writers, too. Take care and thanks for your kind words of encouragement, Diane

Kevin Semeniuk

Date: 10/18/2010 12:04:00 PM

beautiful poetry! you always have such a great approach to writing with your images and over all layout! niice work!

Robert Ball

Date: 10/18/2010 8:11:00 AM

Sara you are a great poet in your own right and anytime you want to use any of my poems to share the word of our Lord Jesus Christ, you not need ask,of course you have my permission always' God bless you and yours and keep up your great writings you are one of my fav's. Robert A. Ball

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/18/2010 6:31:00 AM

Beautiful description of the mood that accompanies the welcome spring rain, Sara. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/17/2010 9:06:00 PM

Very nice imagery Sara.. and a fine form luv.. rain has sparked me to write also as my previous post .. luv when its calm and rains..not all that wind and mess ... my fairy wings on porch are still reeling from last episode..luv.. hope u are well..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/17/2010 8:25:00 PM

VEry very nice, Sara, I thought it might be for the sound/smell contest for its great imagery!

John Rhinem

Date: 10/17/2010 7:35:00 PM

Smile ~ "Wisteria wafts twain." ~ I love this verse & I also love the sounds of mesmerizings chimes &, I love the softness amid beautiful images born within this gloriously precious poe "My Dear, 'Lovely & Precious Sara Kendrick!!!'" ~ "A Fave; 'Very Beautiful'" ~ Hope "You" are well &, "My Love & warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love," John! ~ Smile, "Beautiful Dreams;" Bye!:) ~

Michael Benkhen

Date: 10/17/2010 3:29:00 PM

I like it!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/17/2010 3:15:00 PM

Very nice attempt to write Trois Par Huit, instead a mixer. Nice feelings and emotions on the Spring rain, Sara

Joe Maverick

Date: 10/17/2010 1:54:00 PM

liked this write, flows well and gives off inspration.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/17/2010 12:51:00 PM

soft and lovely like the spring, I hope you and yours are well? Light & Love (favorite line "The pit-a-patter brings to my mind poems, lines, rhymes")