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The Splendor of Fall

Bright lithe and lively fall morning aroma waft out, Courtly swish through a deft pirouette turnabout. Trees hears psithurism leaves sigh to get a glance. Rain's philter makes the earth surface move and dance. Near the river's edge, ducklings splash in boisterous mirth; Ripples break the repetitious echo of the habitable earth. The day rolls up spent, nightfall slowly creeps and does gain; Gentle nuzzling into the boundless horizon once again. 9/15/2023

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Date: 10/17/2023 7:04:00 PM
Oh tis' a lovely season. A favorite of mine and so many others. It lends itself to so many writing ideas. I love to write about nature and read poems with such beautiful imagery. What a nice poem to come across.
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Date: 9/30/2023 12:53:00 PM
Beautiful imagery dear Eve. I especially like the last stanza. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 9/29/2023 2:19:00 PM
Eve, a lovely fall poem, congratulations on your winning placement!
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Date: 9/28/2023 11:20:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me virtually behold Fall splendor since my country is devoid of Fall. Thanks likewise for my placement in your recently-judged contest. God bless you.
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Date: 9/25/2023 6:17:00 PM
Great writing. Masterful use of words.
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Date: 9/18/2023 4:47:00 AM
Lovely writing... I love FALL. God bless you friend. Love, Gina
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Date: 9/17/2023 12:24:00 PM
Your fine expressions and imagery bring fall splendor to life, Eve. I was happy to learn some new words, as well. Happy Sunday! :)
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Date: 9/16/2023 1:56:00 PM
- The splendor of autumn indeed, Eve ... the days are already shorter and the air is crisp ... a beautiful poem :) - Have a wonderful weekend my friend :) - hugs
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/16/2023 6:36:00 PM
It is just starting here as well ,, I cannot wait till it cools down just a little.
Date: 9/15/2023 11:09:00 PM
Eve this is truly a wonderful poem, it reminds me of Lucy introducing you to me for some reason, and wow, your poetry has progressed, it just keeps getting better and better!
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/15/2023 11:40:00 PM
Thank you , you are such a thrill. I've been using some of the paintings you've posted for some of the poems as well as the contest I've sponsor.

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