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The Spider and the Flea-Nursery Rhyme

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"Marry me," the spider said to the flea. Don't you find it cute to live on my web? No, I will never forget your blather. On your bedside, my brother in your deb. You asked for a snack, left me, and be back. Suddenly, you began weaving your neb. Wrapped in a silk cage, promise not to age. Until your last breath rematches the ebb. What did you expect? Didn't you yet elect? I'd act the same manner I did before. You gasp, those deeds. Stay on the web with me. to handle a minuscule bite and more. Here lies the prob, no aim to let you sob. because wedding you seem to be reckless. The goal of a smooth life isn't a fool strife In an auld silken entangle speckless. Don't argue to love less, be deep and guess. Your brother was so tasty, as a nap. What have you just done? a fresh web you've spun! She grinned as she closed the remaining gap.
2nd place contest winner Written: February 27, 2023 Nursery Rhyme Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Eve Roper

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Date: 3/12/2023 12:03:00 PM
Back with Congratulations on your fun Nursery Rhyme win. It was great to read it again. Have a blessed day/week......................
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Date: 3/6/2023 9:33:00 AM
- Back with congratulations, Las :) - hugs
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Date: 3/6/2023 3:11:00 AM
Back with congratulations on this great winning work in Eve's contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing..Sara
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Date: 3/4/2023 9:38:00 PM
Lasaad, Congratulations on your win. Eve.
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Date: 2/28/2023 8:23:00 AM
Don't argue to love less, be deep and guess. Your brother was so tasty, as a nap. What have you just done? a fresh web you've spun! She grinned as she closed the remaining gap. LOL I love this !!! best of luck Sotto! Kindest Regards A.S.
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Date: 2/28/2023 7:55:00 AM
Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Kind of scary so I would a good one for boys. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 2/28/2023 2:17:00 AM
Great nursery rhyme. Best for a win.
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Date: 2/27/2023 1:45:00 PM
A creative write. Good Luck. Have a blessed day writing away...................
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Date: 2/27/2023 11:46:00 AM
- Marriage is challenging ... not always a dance on red roses - Really creative, Las ... a nursery rhyme for adults I guess :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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