The Spellbound Hellhound

The evening's gloom of mistic glow.
Cast it's spell for all to know.
Deep down indide the dark morass.
Where beast's do dwell in the lowest class.

Above the fray looms pious air.
Consumed by those who just won't share.
The day before the last day came.
Somehow they all wound up the same.

Heaven scented plumes of ruse.
Lingered only to confuse.
The Spellbound Hellhound unleashed it's guise.
To show the foolish they're not so wise.

When everyone is on the run.
And there's no place to stay.
The fiendish binds inside our minds.
Will finally have their way.

A world within a world without.
Will leave no room for a single doubt.
And a path beyond a concsious thought.
Is where you'll find what tomorrow taught.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 5/26/2013 4:53:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this creative work..Interesting ideas penned...Thanks for your visits..Sara
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Date: 4/18/2013 1:03:00 AM
hi, there, Robert. Sorry in case you missed my contest for it having closed. I sure did like that one poem of yours. If I ever have another Fave contest, I hope you will keep it in your mind.
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Date: 4/17/2013 3:47:00 PM
wow this is so good robert, the last stanza, is truly amazing, as is all the poem,,,
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Date: 4/12/2013 12:02:00 PM
a perfect 7 poem ~*~SKAT
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Date: 4/11/2013 5:39:00 PM
Well I love this, I can feel that Aries energy all through it ;} cosmic weather swirling, I'm libra/cancer rising & cancer moon. going to fav's .
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Date: 4/11/2013 5:23:00 PM
You've got the right atmosphere for the spooky goings on in this classic. I needed a good dose of fright and it sits well. In fact it's the only excitement I've had today so u dun good Robert, I needed this! Love, Lizzie
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Date: 4/11/2013 12:21:00 PM
WOW !!! EXCELLENT !!! Wonderful choice of words in this poem... love the finish !! Dark and with a bit of fantasy and truth !! Enjoyed !!!
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Date: 4/11/2013 6:31:00 AM
This is a dark one, but I enjoy seeing you post new poems, my friend. Love the rhyming title and the mystery of this one.
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Date: 4/10/2013 5:27:00 PM
i think you had a lot of fun playing with the rhymes in this poem and i enjoyed the results!
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