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The Spell

The horrid witch cast her evil spell And unleashed the bats from out of hell Nightmares replaced those sweet dreams The night echoed with people's screams The old hag cackled at their plight As the fiery bats began to bite She waved her wand and their pain doubled As her cauldron boiled and bubbled 10-30-2020 8 Lines Of Spooky Rhyme Poetry Contest Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Date: 11/11/2020 12:50:00 PM
Wonderfully done, Joseph! Very creative in your flowing lines. Very creative outcome as the witch intensifies pain. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 11/8/2020 7:30:00 AM
You paint a poetic picture of what exactly I expect an evil old witch would look like and do, superb imagery and indeed very creative Joseph. Congratulations my friend a wonderful win, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 11/6/2020 11:45:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great win in this spooky contest, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/6/2020 10:44:00 AM
Joseph, congratulations on your win in Tania's 8 lines of Spooky contest, with this chilling poem_ Constance
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Date: 11/5/2020 1:59:00 PM
Joe, congratulations on your winning placement with your spooky witch poem!
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Date: 11/2/2020 9:13:00 PM
Sounds like she is doing some kind of Voodoo magic to me. "Nightmares replaced those sweet dreams" Yes, she is casting an evil spell indeed. ~ Brandy
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Date: 11/2/2020 2:23:00 AM
Wow! Sure to be on the winners list, Joseph.
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Date: 11/1/2020 10:50:00 AM
Excellent verse for the spooky contest, Joseph. I especially enjoyed that ending.
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Date: 10/31/2020 9:38:00 AM
Very witchy work. Reads like a good contender in any Halloween contest. Thanks for dropping by. Sara
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Date: 10/31/2020 5:37:00 AM
Your eight lines describe Halloween very well .
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Date: 10/31/2020 5:36:00 AM
Very apt for the contest theme--the witch did what she does best. Well written poem, Joseph.
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Date: 10/31/2020 1:49:00 AM
Scary enough. I may lose some sleep tonight. ~~
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Date: 10/30/2020 6:58:00 PM
Hi Joseph, You have penned some “spooky” lines. The image that you painted with words is such a scary sight . Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful weekend:-) Alexis
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