Joseph May Poet Rhyme

The Spell

The horrid witch cast her evil spell
 And unleashed the bats from out of hell
 Nightmares replaced those sweet dreams
 The night echoed with people's screams
 The old hag cackled at their plight
 As the fiery bats began to bite
 She waved her wand and their pain doubled
 As her cauldron boiled and bubbled

 10-30-2020
 8 Lines Of Spooky Rhyme Poetry Contest
 Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Sam Kauffman November 11, 2020 at 12:50 PM Wonderfully done, Joseph! Very creative in your flowing lines. Very creative outcome as the witch intensifies pain. Congratulations on your win!

Jennifer Proxenos November 8, 2020 at 7:30 AM You paint a poetic picture of what exactly I expect an evil old witch would look like and do, superb imagery and indeed very creative Joseph. Congratulations my friend a wonderful win, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Anne-Lise Andresen November 6, 2020 at 11:45 AM - Congratulations on your great win in this spooky contest, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France November 6, 2020 at 10:44 AM Joseph, congratulations on your win in Tania's 8 lines of Spooky contest, with this chilling poem_ Constance

Tania Kitchin November 5, 2020 at 1:59 PM Joe, congratulations on your winning placement with your spooky witch poem!

Brandy Nicole November 2, 2020 at 9:13 PM Sounds like she is doing some kind of Voodoo magic to me. "Nightmares replaced those sweet dreams" Yes, she is casting an evil spell indeed. ~ Brandy

Elaine George November 2, 2020 at 2:23 AM Wow! Sure to be on the winners list, Joseph.

Andrea Dietrich November 1, 2020 at 10:50 AM Excellent verse for the spooky contest, Joseph. I especially enjoyed that ending.

Sara Kendrick October 31, 2020 at 9:38 AM Very witchy work. Reads like a good contender in any Halloween contest. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Silent One October 31, 2020 at 5:37 AM Your eight lines describe Halloween very well .

Vijay Pandit October 31, 2020 at 5:36 AM Very apt for the contest theme--the witch did what she does best. Well written poem, Joseph.

Victor Buhagiar October 31, 2020 at 1:49 AM Scary enough. I may lose some sleep tonight. ~~

Alexis Y. October 30, 2020 at 6:58 PM Hi Joseph, You have penned some “spooky” lines. The image that you painted with words is such a scary sight . Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful weekend:-) Alexis