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The Specter of Panic

His mind is a blank; it matches the screen in front of him, staring back silent and mean daring him fill it with meaning and rhyme as the Enemy ticks in the background -- Time Seconds ebb away, each one a dull minute his Fount of Creation dry, nothing in it Inviting a creature to well up from the deep The Specter of Panic, hounds him to weep For the loss of his pen, of his ink -- yea - his will to knot up his fears in a ball, and roll them downhill till they crash at the bottom in a sickening heap shards of despair born of hopelessness deep O, say it's not so, that's it nought but a dream that reality's illusion's a loud empty scream

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Date: 11/20/2018 7:26:00 AM
Excellent poem! I like the line 'to knot up his fears in a ball and roll them downhill'. It stood out for me. And I love the ending. Well written :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/20/2018 10:21:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi. I appreciate your encouragement and support, as well as your generous evaluation of the poem. Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 11/20/2018 6:07:00 AM
We have a secret weapon, Gershon. Her name is Nina Parmenter. Once when I was completely bereft, ideas depleted to the "inth" degree I let Nina know and she sent me ten ideas. I used them all, and they were fantastic. SoupMail her or me if you need us. I should be able to come up with an idea or two, and Nina will come up with a dozen. Great write, as we have all been there, and I mean ALL of US!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/20/2018 10:20:00 AM
Thank you so much for the great tip, Caren. Appreciated. Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 11/20/2018 4:25:00 AM
that's it nought but a dream!! NIGHTMARE! -maybe /// lovely poem
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/20/2018 10:19:00 AM
Ha! Almost used the word nightmare in this poem, myself. Thanks for viewing and commenting, Mahtab.

Book: Shattered Sighs