The Special Place

In the special place, 
There is chaos,
There is love,
There is beauty,
There is pain 

It is a place where it is hard to breathe
When I try to catch my breath
It is a place where I get chained to the ground
When I try to run away 
It is a place where I see true beauty
When I am brave enough to visit 

It is the place
Where your memory lives 
As I live, everyday
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 11/5/2018 12:35:00 AM
Sincere congratulations for your awesome win in LuLoo's contest, Janine - blessings and best wishes - keep up the great work, my friend! :-) <3
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Janine Jacobs
Date: 12/13/2018 1:43:00 PM
Thank you so much :) xxx
Date: 10/28/2018 5:37:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Janine. Well done.
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Janine Jacobs
Date: 10/28/2018 5:45:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 10/28/2018 11:49:00 AM
beautiful and so much said in such few words, loved that last line. Thank you and congratulations on your placement. -luloo :)
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Janine Jacobs
Date: 10/28/2018 12:39:00 PM
Thank you so much :)
Date: 10/11/2018 10:19:00 PM
So much feeling. Nice poem.
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Janine Jacobs
Date: 10/12/2018 10:16:00 AM
Thank you xxx
Date: 10/10/2018 11:39:00 AM
Janine, you have penned a deep emotional poem, I have also been in that special place, well done ~
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Janine Jacobs
Date: 10/10/2018 12:46:00 PM
Thank you so much xxx
Date: 10/9/2018 5:33:00 PM
This brings the reader there. Good one :)
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Janine Jacobs
Date: 10/9/2018 5:53:00 PM
Thank you Heidi, much appreciated
Date: 10/9/2018 5:27:00 PM
Really well done. You have captured your theme nicely
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Janine Jacobs
Date: 10/9/2018 5:53:00 PM
Thanks Chris, I truly appreciate it
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