Janine Jacobs Poet Free verse

The Special Place

In the special place, 
There is chaos,
There is love,
There is beauty,
There is pain 

It is a place where it is hard to breathe
When I try to catch my breath
It is a place where I get chained to the ground
When I try to run away 
It is a place where I see true beauty
When I am brave enough to visit 

It is the place
Where your memory lives 
As I live, everyday

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Gregory Richard Barden November 5, 2018 at 12:35 AM Sincere congratulations for your awesome win in LuLoo's contest, Janine - blessings and best wishes - keep up the great work, my friend! :-) <3 Janine Jacobs December 13, 2018 at 1:43 PM Thank you so much :) xxx

Line Gauthier October 28, 2018 at 5:37 PM Congrats on your win, Janine. Well done. Janine Jacobs October 28, 2018 at 5:45 PM Thank you :)

Beautiful Scars October 28, 2018 at 11:49 AM beautiful and so much said in such few words, loved that last line. Thank you and congratulations on your placement. -luloo :) Janine Jacobs October 28, 2018 at 12:39 PM Thank you so much :)

P.S. Awtry October 11, 2018 at 10:19 PM So much feeling. Nice poem. Janine Jacobs October 12, 2018 at 10:16 AM Thank you xxx

Constance La France October 10, 2018 at 11:39 AM Janine, you have penned a deep emotional poem, I have also been in that special place, well done ~ Janine Jacobs October 10, 2018 at 12:46 PM Thank you so much xxx

Heidi Sands October 9, 2018 at 5:33 PM This brings the reader there. Good one :) Janine Jacobs October 9, 2018 at 5:53 PM Thank you Heidi, much appreciated

Chris Green October 9, 2018 at 5:27 PM Really well done. You have captured your theme nicely Janine Jacobs October 9, 2018 at 5:53 PM Thanks Chris, I truly appreciate it