Andrea Dietrich Poet Kimo

The Special Day of Two Very Different Girls

thousands of dollars and months of planning
her big dream just four hours long. . . . 
the wonderful wedding

a small wedding; just friends and family
faith, kindness and kids follow. . . . 
the wonderful marriage


For Dr. Ram Metha's Contest:
"Wedding is one of the special events 
in marriage"

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Jack Horne August 16, 2012 at 1:33 PM I don't remember this one - glad I chose it tonight, Andrea. Love this thought provoking kimo

Kash Poet September 24, 2011 at 9:39 PM Hi ,What is Biblical English?

John Loving Iii April 4, 2011 at 12:44 PM congradulations on your win in the contest. john

Carolyn Devonshire April 4, 2011 at 7:31 AM You did a fabulous job here, Andrea. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown April 4, 2011 at 6:05 AM Congratulations on your win Andrea in the contest "Wedding is one of the special events in marriage" sponsored by Dr. Ram Mehta. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud April 4, 2011 at 2:42 AM whattta whooot, heartie... love the take on wedding and marriage... a fav of mine.. big cheesr for the greeeat win! :) hugggs

Kabuteng P.Ink K. April 3, 2011 at 7:10 PM Super congrats on your win with this Andrea-- I knew I would be back here to congratulate you-- hope to see you soon here, sweetie :) hugs to you :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 3, 2011 at 6:15 PM Congrats Andrea on your fantastic win in the wedding contest with this super entry luv and wonderful write too...enjoy another top ten win with luv..

John Freeman April 3, 2011 at 4:17 PM You're looking good up there at the top Andrea. Congratulations on your worthy poem's second place honor. Quite a touching verse friend. Agape, Moses

Nicole Hawkins April 3, 2011 at 4:14 PM very nice! Congratulations, Andrea :) -Nicole

Dr.Ram Mehta April 3, 2011 at 3:09 PM Congratulations on the second place win in my contest, Andrea

James Foulk April 2, 2011 at 6:08 PM a very warm and moving piece of poetry, enjoyed this one.

James Fraser March 29, 2011 at 12:57 PM Lovely warm Kimo Andrea. Boy oh boy, Dr. Ram has a toughie to judge. Good luck Utah Babe....:)

Kabuteng P.Ink K. March 26, 2011 at 10:07 PM I really like how you did yours, Andrea-- it really puts things in perspective-- the wonderful wedding vs the wonderful marriage-- really great take on Dr. Ram's challenge-- and wow I sure missed out on reading A LOT of your writes sweetie-- good thing I can catch up today :D -- hugs to you :)

Sara Kendrick March 24, 2011 at 5:18 PM Reads like a winner to me ...Very creative idea for the contest..Good luck..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..I am glad that you gleaned something from it.Sara

Phyllis Babcock March 22, 2011 at 4:38 PM Not everyone wants a big wedding and depends whether it is boy or girl. Nothing wrong with choosing either way. love phyl

Dr.Ram Mehta March 22, 2011 at 12:48 PM Thanks for the entry, Andrea. something to be think over

Carolyn Devonshire March 22, 2011 at 11:07 AM It doesn't matter how large or small the wedding is. The feelings shared between the bride and groom are al that matter, Andrea, and you described this well in your kimo. Best wishes in Dr. Ram's contest! Love, Carolyn

Gert W. Knop March 22, 2011 at 8:44 AM Nice look at weddings, Andrea! Enjoyed the read this late afternoon. Best of luck in Dr. Ram's contest! And thank you for your continous kind comments! By the way my right arm and hand are still painful...Have a great week!...Gert:)

Matthew Anish March 22, 2011 at 6:34 AM What a poem! "Darkling" is the title of a book by Anna Rabinowitz. You can punch in the Autho's name and find out what else she wrote. I found it to be an intresting long poem. Yours Matthew Anish

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 22, 2011 at 5:54 AM Sweet and lovely lines Andrea for this contest.. about your daughter luv? or u? it is very charismatic a write.. good luck in the contest my friend..

Barbara Gorelick March 22, 2011 at 5:40 AM A great look at weddings..I love both kinds..as long as I dont have to pay for the first onel...lol. BG

Daver Austin March 22, 2011 at 5:18 AM Yes, marriage does make a difference. Is this the idea behind the title? Anywho. Luck in the contest. Love, Dave

Wiseton Prins March 22, 2011 at 5:04 AM So nicely said... i'd prefer the second wending though, and i'd come riding a wild mustang,,, wish fresh wild flowers in hand... and a fishbone necklace from the depths of the lake... for my bride to wear> dont worry... i talk - sorry - write alot. >Nice Andrea!

Wilma Neels March 22, 2011 at 5:00 AM Andrea, how I love your entry, lovely approach.. Good luck for the contest, love Wilma

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