The Space Between Us

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Sometimes the space between us feels un-natural, 
Like part of me is missing.  
These times I think of touching your shoulder 
With my finger, tracing the outline of your body 
With my hand. Where each curve leaves an outline 
I long to fill with parts of me. 
You are the luxurious softness I fall into.
You meet me in my yearning, 
Pressing your softness against where I am hard. 
Like a hard rain pressing on a soft rose,
Whose thirst absorbs the quenching rain, 
Drinks it in, transforms it into life.
In the after-shower there is a rainbow, 
Colors merge into warm light. 
I don’t want to be your valentine,
I just want to hold you in my arms forever,
Press my cheek to yours and breathe your honey hair.  
Buried there, I can feel you pressed against me. 
As I touch you, a rose blossoms and
The doors to Heaven 
Open once again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 1/4/2021 6:24:00 AM
Ooh la la. This is delicious. Well done!
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