The Space Between

I gather up all of my courage
My gaze drifts to the evening sky 
All that space there between 
Alien visitation must be a lie 
The sun and moon still shine for us 
Eventually they burn out and die 
Everywhere a sea of murkiness 
With little spots of distant light 
No comfort in their glowing beacons
They lack warmth beyond their sight
All the wisdom in every book 
Can’t make sense out of a starry night 
We may someday sprint off this rock 
Conquer every planet to the last 
Our population my even explode 
An empire that will be unsurpassed 
The only thing worse than a prison too small
Is a prison that is too vast 


Dedicated to the Messiah.....He knows why

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 2/11/2016 8:43:00 PM
You have a way of thinking outside the box, and that's fact reflective of two last lines. Brilliant.
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Date: 12/27/2015 7:41:00 AM
Amazing :)
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Date: 9/20/2015 2:46:00 PM
great to read this again Nathan, I hope you are well at present..'
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Date: 3/4/2015 1:33:00 PM
Wonderful write Nathan which leaves the reader thinking, James :)
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Date: 1/25/2015 9:45:00 PM
So nice to read your verse this evening! Light & Love
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Date: 12/7/2014 11:49:00 AM
I am rereading this and I feel it is one of your finest works. VEry deep. A FAVE
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Date: 12/7/2014 6:00:00 AM
Loved it all over again.
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Date: 12/5/2014 5:39:00 PM
Please let us know where this wall is that you speak of. It would be awesome to have a collage in members off the wall thoughts on it. Peace. :)
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Date: 9/13/2014 5:10:00 PM
Good one here Nathan love the way you condensed all the vastness..'
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Date: 6/27/2014 4:20:00 PM
All the wisdom in every book Can’t make sense out of a starry night --Astronomical signs set down inside the schism warped web, spUn Son.
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Date: 5/29/2014 7:32:00 PM
Very interesting & beautifully done Looking forward to more Mazz
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Date: 5/26/2014 11:31:00 AM
Ash's to ash's, lost in space. Where to now St. Peter, when we leave this place. Existing in a void annoyed. Are we all just an alien android? Drift in peace dear fellow saint. The picture's always what you paint. Peace. :)
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Date: 5/21/2014 9:45:00 PM
Nathan This is a creative and unique write. It keeps the reader intrigued and captive till the end. Thank you for the nice comment on my Butterfly poem.
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Date: 5/21/2014 1:55:00 PM
Hi Nathan, This blew me away!!! WOW. Very very nice. I adored the entire write. The last stanza did a thunder in my soul. So true and powerful. Agree he is the true one who does. Thanks for sharing this write with us. Thanks for visiting my page and leaving your kind comment. Love and Peace, Deborah
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Date: 5/21/2014 12:48:00 PM
Very good. Interesting topic. Read this more than once. One grammar correction though is to change to -> too on the next-to-last line. Thaks for commenting on my pieces.
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Date: 5/21/2014 5:10:00 PM
yes my grammar and spelling sux and my spell checker missed this so keep pointing out errors I know my work is full of them. and thanks for you comment
Date: 5/21/2014 11:20:00 AM
Beautiful man. AND he does know why. Absolutely. Cheers my man, Andrew
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Date: 5/21/2014 10:53:00 AM
Love the balance between serious and witty! You have a healthy, yet provocative pen! // paul
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Date: 5/13/2014 6:25:00 PM
The ending is a knockout. The rest a pleasure to read.
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Date: 3/19/2014 11:18:00 PM
wow, very profound ending there, Nathan. So cool.
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Date: 3/15/2014 5:08:00 AM
Nice write , Nathan ... Enjoyed stopping by .. Congrats on the fine win ... Saanvi :))
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Date: 3/10/2014 5:56:00 AM
Very Wonderful write. Congrats on the win, nathan
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Date: 3/10/2014 1:22:00 AM
Guess who'? Long time no see. I know you hate when we drop a word of congratulations on your poem LMFAO awesome win. congratulations, ~ Love ~ SKAT
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Date: 3/9/2014 4:38:00 PM
- A wonderful poem posted for Giorgio A.V. contest - "Impress me with a small poem III" - Congratulations on your win, Nathan !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/25/2014 7:50:00 AM
I can relate to way you write in other words my writing display same patterns. I like it
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Date: 12/19/2013 5:57:00 PM
Love this write, Nathan. Tonight I've been reading poetry, maybe trying to find answers. Some days I felt imprisoned though I knew I'd committed no crime. Still breaking away into freedom can be even more of a restriction. Blah blah blah, and more blahs.:) Merry Christmas! Mikki
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