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The Soup Is Swimming

The Soup is swimming with amazing peeps Animals and vegetables, loaded with heaps Can't imagine no yummies No Soup for the tummy Would throw in my napkin and sit there and weep

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Constance La France

Date: 5/6/2018 9:41:00 PM

Jack, oh limerick king, you are back to yourself, no more talking of leaving, this is a good one.... I did leave soup for awhile years ago, even deleted all my poems, it was a huge mistake and I regretted it so much, but I came back and here I am, sometimes people need to step back but NEVER delete, is my advice to all ...

Jack Ellison
Date: 5/7/2018 5:31:00 AM

"step back but NEVER delete" methinks it's called a breather!!!! LOL Thanks a bunch... love, Happy Jack XOX

James Horn

Date: 5/6/2018 7:38:00 PM

Counting Sheep So I Can Sleep I continuously am counting sheep; Praying that God will let me sleep; Wife ignoring; Started snoring; Woke me and said I better not keep.

Jack Ellison
Date: 5/7/2018 5:29:00 AM

Hmm...us Limerick guys eh!!! Good morning Sir James!!!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/6/2018 11:38:00 AM

Hello Jack, This means I get no more chuckles from reading your poetry. I for one will miss you. You are one of my favourite poets. Can you write me a good by poem so i can keep in my home made poetry book. Thanks . Will miss you. Have a nice day my friend. xxxx-ooo

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/6/2018 1:13:00 PM

Hello Jack, It makes me happy to know that you have reconsidered I look forward to the poem you will write for me. Love Dar De B. have a nice day my friend.xxxx-ooo

Jack Ellison
Date: 5/6/2018 11:43:00 AM

Have decided to reconsider and stick around after finding out how many others are experiencing a reduced readership as well!!! Read the other one I posted today... "A Compromise"! However, I will still write one, especially for you dear friend!!! Love, Happy Jack XOX