The Soup

I'm glad to be part of the soup,
it has many flavors in the pot.
We are such an amazing group,
sometimes It's cold, I prefer hot. 


Overall it is a great place,
i'm glad to be part of the soup.
Who knew I would like cyberspace?
I often come here to regroup.

Since being here I've gained new friends, 
they have taught me many things.
I'm glad to be part of the soup,
when I'm here it makes my heart sing 

It's a good place to learn and grow
I was taught by a gifted troop, 
embracing what they had to show.
I'm glad to be part of the soup. 


Alexis Y.
08-06-16


*This is dedicated to a poetic friend
who suggested that I do this form.


A Quatern is a sixteen line French form composed of four quatrains. It is similar to the Kyrielle and the Retourne. It has a refrain that is in a different place in each quatrain. The first line of stanza one is the second line of stanza two, third line of stanza three, and fouth line of stanza four. A quatern has eight syllables per line. It does not have to be iambic or follow a set rhyme scheme. line 1 line 2 line 3 line 4 line 5 line 6 (line 1) line 7 line 8 line 9 line 10 line 11 (line 1) line 12 line 13 line 14 line 15 line 16 (line 1)
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Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 19, 2016 at 10:42 AM
A very sweet and honest poem, Alexis. Good quatrain form, I must admit. I've mislabeled a few of my poems as quatrain. But, I'm learning too. Ty for sharing such a warm bowl of feel-good soup for everybody. I promise not to be a soup nazi today. Love and more love to you and yours.
Raven Avatar
August 9, 2016 at 5:07 PM
Hi Alexis, a wonderful write on your feelings about the soup and soupers. An excellent poem Alexis. The soup, many different things to many people, yet all are needed to make a beautiful bowl. Have a good day. This has to be a seven. Hugs....Mike. XX
Allison Avatar
August 9, 2016 at 1:34 PM
A souper poem Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx
Warrior Avatar
August 8, 2016 at 8:47 PM
A true super souper lol...great quatern Alexis...god bless...^WW^
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 8, 2016 at 2:44 PM
This poem is so delightful Alexis. I feel that way about our group too. Cheers, Connie ; )
Andresen Avatar
August 8, 2016 at 1:56 PM
- The soup is just right spicy ..... tasty content - Lovely poems, Alexis - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Horsman Avatar
August 8, 2016 at 10:47 AM
Enjoyed this Alexis, my sentiments entirely.
Kendrick Avatar
August 8, 2016 at 9:27 AM
Glad that you wrote it and it reads like a winner for the contest..Way to go..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara
Neels Avatar
August 8, 2016 at 7:35 AM
Alexis this is just awesome. You make it look so easy.. brilliant! I struggle to do rhyme :)
Dietrich Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 6:13 PM
YOU DID FANTASTIC. Now don't you just love this form? SEVEN
Y. Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 9:36 PM
Hi Andrea, I was hoping that you would like it. And yes I do love it. Thanks for the high mark:-) Alexis
La France Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 3:43 PM
Alexis, this is LOVELY and so well done ~
May Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 9:41 AM
Very nicely penned Alexis...enjoyed...
Gupta Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 6:25 AM
I agree with you one hundred percent ... A nice Quatern ...
Trifiatis Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 3:49 AM
The essence of your poem for me deserves a huge seven for it is honest and true. I for one am grateful to the soup for it gave me the opportunity to express myself and to grow poetically, furthermore, met a lot of fine poets and people. Of course there were some not that fine but even them have helped. Bravo dear, Alexis!
Mark Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 2:31 AM
Rhymes good, look at the first line of the final quatern....needs a tweak " it's a good place to learn and grow" .....try that ..Ian
Y. Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 2:44 AM
Hi Ian, Thanks for pointing that out. I didn't catch that. I appreciate that you stopped by:-) Alexis
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