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The Sounds of Spring

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The Sounds of Spring

The Sounds of Spring
About: This poem is describes my feelings of the season spring. How the wonders of it are a miracle. A place so green dries and dies, when the cold comes. Then blooms and grooves of new life of all God's creations. ATTENTION:All my poems are posted by me. No one else. Other websites, that I have uploaded my poems on are: forums.familyfriendpoems.com and wattpad.com (the username is the same on this website, as well as those: ricoelhady)
When the sun lights up over the land, the groves grow golden red, under the light, The day then starts, with the clinging of the bells in the far east, and the roosters singing at dawn, the sun's golden rays peak out to play spreading all over the land, The blue jays sing, the flowers bloom, and the bees spread the scent, the day shines brighter than any other icy day, The game animals awake, to the sounds from the wind, they sing and perch to the instruments of day, The creaking of the old mill, on Grey's hill, wakes up the town, people of all ages boom through the day, clapping and dancing, to the rhythm of the day, The clouds embrace across the blue, cuddling and huddling the Sun and sky, sparking the land under a disco light, Me, what do I do? I sit nearby the big, blue river, listening, to the plops and ploops and plips, of the fish, jumping here and there, Today is a special day, the first time this year, nature decided to, sing the sounds of spring

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Date: 9/22/2017 6:42:00 AM
I adore Spring and you brought it back to life for me. Another Winter coming my way, then I'll be heading again towards my favorite of seasons. Thx for sharing.
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Date: 9/7/2017 6:33:00 PM
The similes, the images, even the imagined smells. I love it. A big welcome to PS.
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Date: 9/7/2017 6:35:00 PM
P.S. I made it a favorite!
Date: 9/7/2017 12:26:00 PM
Hi Reem, such a well penned poem, it took me right into the early spring days of my youth. Your poem made me think of seeing the first robin birds and their sky blue eggs in the bird houses. A joy to read. A strong 7 (means excellent poem) :))))))
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