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The Soul of the Universe

Look
She stares
Do you see?
The face of humanity?
The universe wrapped in two eyes
The devil needs no spies
Humanity has no disguise
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Smith Avatar
February 25, 2015 at 4:36 PM
WOW!! WOW!!.. 7 for this powerful, incredible write, my friend.. Hugs.. Arlene
Vaso Avatar
February 25, 2015 at 9:37 PM
Thank you Arlene, this is very kind of you!
Lindley Avatar
February 21, 2015 at 8:38 PM
Thought provoking write and picture. Humanity--the good and the bad, which shall prevail? A7 on this one my friend, enjoyed the read...
Vaso Avatar
February 21, 2015 at 11:17 PM
Thanks so much Robert
Dunn Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 8:29 AM
Dear Arthur, Love pic my friend and yes I love this being we able to put pictures with my poems it's fun. Love your poem it is thought provoking, the last lines go so well with the pic, great choices here. Humanity is a frail species, but we think that we are bullet proof beyond the realm of extinction. But we are so wrong on this notion, I just hope we wake up before it's to late, cheri
Vaso Avatar
February 19, 2015 at 10:43 PM
Thank you Cherl, wake up? Sometimes I prefer dreamland!! Hugs
Smith Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 4:41 PM
So sad...I see it dying more and more each day
Vaso Avatar
February 19, 2015 at 10:41 PM
As dark as I write, we see what we choose to see, sort of the cup is half empty or half full! Somehow we seem to move forward and in the darkest moments, sometimes we see humanity at its best!!
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February 16, 2015 at 5:07 AM
I've seen this photo before. It breaks me. What a profound write. Hugs
Vaso Avatar
February 19, 2015 at 10:36 PM
Thank you dear Eileen, Poetess of Romance!
Ward Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 2:47 AM
Profound! Well done, Alicia.
Vaso Avatar
February 19, 2015 at 10:34 PM
Thank you Alicia!!
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February 16, 2015 at 1:53 AM
Chillingly Profound! A seven dear Vaso!
Vaso Avatar
February 19, 2015 at 10:34 PM
Thank you Demetrios, with soupmail down missed many comments , just catching up now!!!
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