Sara Kendrick Poet Quatrain

The Sordid Affair

There's money___then there's love
Looking back at him __desiring 
Brief encounters above
Husband's comments deriding

So handsome fire__home ice
Guilt, shame, remorse____desire
One last glimpse maybe twice
Marriage but children__can't transpire

Inner turmoil__wishing
Should I walk away now
Turn turn around running
We'll say the wedding's vow

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Debbie Guzzi April 30, 2010 at 2:40 PM a verse about being torn...sigh...BIG HUG! Light & Love (Thanks for the LONG read!)

Danny Nunn April 29, 2010 at 5:45 PM It does not pay to fool around once married, always get caught sooner or later..thanks on sheep...coyotes are cowards, don't be afraid of them...takes 4 to catch a cotton tail..I have a caught millions of them on the ranch...only bad when they have rabbies?? Danny

Lynette Chachere April 29, 2010 at 10:06 AM i like this write Sara, i really do.one feels love for another, though they aren't his/hers.and yet, it's still love.this problem can have meanings that are so perplexed at times that mean more beyond the issue. you feel sorrow, is this wrong? the question they should ask themselves is what was this for?... awesome poem Sara.just great. -Always&Forever Lynette

Kabuteng P.Ink K. April 29, 2010 at 6:37 AM I wish you the best of luck in the contest, Sara :) this is really nicely done :)

Mitch White April 28, 2010 at 8:18 PM Such a dilemma, nice write Good Luck to too Sara

Lori Phipps April 28, 2010 at 1:42 PM oOOOH Yes very nice description that I can see winning first in this contest. And thank you so much for the comments on my poem!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 28, 2010 at 12:32 PM Wonderful piece Sara and good luck in the contest... what a great idea Iolanda had and great photo with it...luv.. Linda-Marie..

Faleshia Murphy April 28, 2010 at 9:12 AM very nice if for contest good luck and thanks so much for your sweet comments and all your support have a great day faleshia

Carrie Richards April 28, 2010 at 6:53 AM So well describes another view of this painting! Good luck in the contest, Sara!! Carrie

Doris Culverhouse April 28, 2010 at 6:53 AM naughty!! surprising...

Michael J. Falotico April 28, 2010 at 5:40 AM nice write!!! very good

Joe Flach April 28, 2010 at 5:38 AM Well done. Your pen certainly is creative! :-). Good luck in the contest.

Ray Dillard April 28, 2010 at 4:47 AM way to go Sara! Good luck in the contest! RAY