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The Sordid Affair

There's money___then there's love Looking back at him __desiring Brief encounters above Husband's comments deriding So handsome fire__home ice Guilt, shame, remorse____desire One last glimpse maybe twice Marriage but children__can't transpire Inner turmoil__wishing Should I walk away now Turn turn around running We'll say the wedding's vow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/30/2010 2:40:00 PM
a verse about being torn...sigh...BIG HUG! Light & Love (Thanks for the LONG read!)
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Date: 4/29/2010 5:45:00 PM
It does not pay to fool around once married, always get caught sooner or later..thanks on sheep...coyotes are cowards, don't be afraid of them...takes 4 to catch a cotton tail..I have a caught millions of them on the ranch...only bad when they have rabbies?? Danny
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Date: 4/29/2010 10:06:00 AM
i like this write Sara, i really do.one feels love for another, though they aren't his/hers.and yet, it's still love.this problem can have meanings that are so perplexed at times that mean more beyond the issue. you feel sorrow, is this wrong? the question they should ask themselves is what was this for?... awesome poem Sara.just great. -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 4/29/2010 6:37:00 AM
I wish you the best of luck in the contest, Sara :) this is really nicely done :)
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Date: 4/28/2010 8:18:00 PM
Such a dilemma, nice write Good Luck to too Sara
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Date: 4/28/2010 1:42:00 PM
oOOOH Yes very nice description that I can see winning first in this contest. And thank you so much for the comments on my poem!
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Date: 4/28/2010 12:32:00 PM
Wonderful piece Sara and good luck in the contest... what a great idea Iolanda had and great photo with it...luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 4/28/2010 9:12:00 AM
very nice if for contest good luck and thanks so much for your sweet comments and all your support have a great day faleshia
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Date: 4/28/2010 6:53:00 AM
naughty!! surprising...
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Date: 4/28/2010 6:53:00 AM
So well describes another view of this painting! Good luck in the contest, Sara!! Carrie
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Date: 4/28/2010 5:40:00 AM
nice write!!! very good
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Date: 4/28/2010 5:38:00 AM
Well done. Your pen certainly is creative! :-). Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 4/28/2010 4:47:00 AM
way to go Sara! Good luck in the contest! RAY
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