The Sonnet Man's Seduction

She opens her soul to me and I gaze
To see that it is for me that she yearns,
As the touch of her lips sets me ablaze,
And I am content to just let it burn.
Her perfect pairs of flesh stand between us,
And yet I can still feel her heart beating,
As my fingers solicit her spines trust,
By pleasing her with the warmest greeting.
Now, from back to thigh, she swells with passion;
Inch by inch my desire for her grows
To the point that my love becomes fashion,
No longer controlling where my blood flows.
       Just when I am free to do what I please,
       Another woman brings me to my knees.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 11:29 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week Doc. Love, Carol
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April 11, 2011 at 8:43 AM
Congrats on your poem being featured this week. God Bless Phyl
George   Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 6:44 AM
Such an outpouring of passion! Many congrats on this feature of the week. Lainie
Mehta Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 5:59 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, dakarai
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June 11, 2010 at 5:26 AM
GOOD MORNING,..P.D.
Brown Avatar
May 12, 2010 at 6:23 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Dakarai. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
May 11, 2010 at 6:04 PM
A fine passionate poem. I enjoyed the couplet
A   Avatar
May 11, 2010 at 4:43 PM
wow, this was an intense write . nice one
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