Get Your Premium Membership

The Song On Your Lips

The smile on your face lit a fire in my heart Up above the sun came out The clouds they did part The bounce in your step set my two feet in motion The waves fairly danced as they flowed o'er the ocean The song on your lips touched the strings of my soul Passion pulsed through our veins as Love took control

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 2/25/2020 10:08:00 PM
Beautiful romance flows with passion in the sweet ink of your poetic pen, my dear friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Login to Reply
Ashley Avatar
Susan Ashley
Date: 2/26/2020 2:30:00 PM
Awww, thanks, Gersh. It’s nice to have some time to spend with your sweet poetry :)
Wolf Avatar
Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/26/2020 1:10:00 PM
Can't get over how nice it is to see your avatar again. Thank you so much for your encouragement, Susan! Cheers, Gershon
Date: 2/24/2020 7:38:00 PM
A lovely, smoochy romantic poem. Didn't know you had it in you, Gersh. Haha!
Login to Reply
Wolf Avatar
Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/25/2020 2:28:00 AM
Just part of being a poet. Gotta throw in a kiss or two once in a while to keep 'em honest. :) gw
Date: 2/23/2020 11:51:00 PM
Sweet, lovely poem..
Login to Reply
Wolf Avatar
Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/24/2020 4:45:00 PM
Thank you so much for your encouragement, my friend! :) gw
Date: 2/23/2020 10:55:00 PM
And it all began with a smile! A lovely verse, romantic and uplifting, with impressive imagery. Thanks for sharing, Gershon. :)
Login to Reply
Wolf Avatar
Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/24/2020 4:42:00 PM
So glad you like my primitive attempts at romance. Thank you for your kind words, Evelyn! Best always, Gershon
Date: 2/23/2020 9:03:00 PM
wow… such a romantic verse falling from your pen... one never knows what they will find when they come to your poetry corner... you offer a fine array my friend... hugs
Login to Reply
Wolf Avatar
Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/23/2020 9:36:00 PM
Haha. You never know. It's a Leap Year, so my heart has thawed a bit. :) gw
Date: 2/23/2020 6:47:00 PM
Lovely, you true romantic! Singing, dancing and smiling too!
Login to Reply
Wolf Avatar
Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/23/2020 7:57:00 PM
Aw, shucks. Somewhere in this old frame there's a heart. Thanks!! :) Gershon
Date: 2/23/2020 5:50:00 PM
Hello GERSHON Wolf, i like this poem. To me it is romantic. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Login to Reply
De Beaulieu Avatar
Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/24/2020 12:49:00 PM
Hello Gershon, best wishes to you as well. Enjoy your day my friend.
Wolf Avatar
Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/23/2020 6:17:00 PM
Oh, thank you so much, Darlene. I wanted this to come across as romantic. Best wishes, Gershon

Book: Reflection on the Important Things