Caroline Cécile Delacroix Poet Choka

The Song of the Country

Leave it all a while
While I make a way for you
You have bravely crossed rough road
And you are weary.
See the country quiet
Quite a hiding place for you
Where you will not even know
A trace of city.
Feel the sun's spring smile
While you walk terrains in bloom
Where wild life will play its show
Just for you sweetly.
Hear the symphony
The song I will play for you
My love is what you will know
Breathe tranquility.
 
By CarolineCécile
Copyright © 04.04.11

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James Foulk April 14, 2011 at 10:15 AM a great piece of work, enjoyed reading thank you for reading my poetry and for your kind comments

Robert A. Dufresne April 6, 2011 at 7:52 PM A relaxing enjoyable write, Caroline. I need to read this at work. ...Be well? I already is. :) thank you. right back at you

Daver Austin April 6, 2011 at 2:06 PM Ah, so restful. Big cities? Bummer! Love, daver

Caroline Cécile Delacroix April 6, 2011 at 12:27 AM It is not me speaking in this poem actually, it is God speaking. :)

Carolyn Devonshire April 5, 2011 at 9:12 PM So tender and compassionate, Caroline. Anyone who is blessed to know you as a friend is lucky. Few people offer "tranquility" and help others alleviate their stress. Sorry to hear nothing has changed, but I think there may be something special ahead for you. Keep the light of hope alive! Love, Carolyn

James Peranteau April 5, 2011 at 3:15 PM Such a soft write dear poet...so inspiring, I just want to kick back and relax now ;) have a great week Caroline...much love, james

Andrea Dietrich April 5, 2011 at 3:06 PM Awesomely peaceful. Stunning final line, Caroline!

Carol Sunshine Brown April 5, 2011 at 7:10 AM Thank you for sharing your magnificently beautiful poetry Caroline. I enjoyed reading it and hope to read more of it soon. May you always find the inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta April 5, 2011 at 4:44 AM Lovely piece of poetry on the song of the country with nice images, Caroline

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 5, 2011 at 4:15 AM This lovely piece sounds like Paradise Caroline with your superb imagery and grand visuals my friend.. a place of repose and refreshment.. luv breathe tranquility ..which all search for luv..

Harry Horsman April 5, 2011 at 12:19 AM beautiful poem, as a young man in England i always believed there was two Englands. the urban and the rural, this wonderful poem brings this home for me. awesome. Harry

Iolanda Scripca April 4, 2011 at 11:32 PM Need to make sure I rated it. :)

Iolanda Scripca April 4, 2011 at 10:33 PM Your choka gives me a certain peace of the soul, dear Caroline. "Feel the sun's spring smile While you walk terrains in bloom" and "The song I will play for you My love is what you will know Breathe tranquility." Great poetry. I wish I found that tranquility in my life... Love, your friend :)