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The Song of the Country

Leave it all a while While I make a way for you You have bravely crossed rough road And you are weary. See the country quiet Quite a hiding place for you Where you will not even know A trace of city. Feel the sun's spring smile While you walk terrains in bloom Where wild life will play its show Just for you sweetly. Hear the symphony The song I will play for you My love is what you will know Breathe tranquility. By CarolineCécile Copyright © 04.04.11

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James Foulk

Date: 4/14/2011 10:15:00 AM

a great piece of work, enjoyed reading thank you for reading my poetry and for your kind comments

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 4/6/2011 7:52:00 PM

A relaxing enjoyable write, Caroline. I need to read this at work. ...Be well? I already is. :) thank you. right back at you

Daver Austin

Date: 4/6/2011 2:06:00 PM

Ah, so restful. Big cities? Bummer! Love, daver

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 4/6/2011 12:27:00 AM

It is not me speaking in this poem actually, it is God speaking. :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/5/2011 9:12:00 PM

So tender and compassionate, Caroline. Anyone who is blessed to know you as a friend is lucky. Few people offer "tranquility" and help others alleviate their stress. Sorry to hear nothing has changed, but I think there may be something special ahead for you. Keep the light of hope alive! Love, Carolyn

James Peranteau

Date: 4/5/2011 3:15:00 PM

Such a soft write dear poet...so inspiring, I just want to kick back and relax now ;) have a great week Caroline...much love, james

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/5/2011 3:06:00 PM

Awesomely peaceful. Stunning final line, Caroline!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/5/2011 7:10:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your magnificently beautiful poetry Caroline. I enjoyed reading it and hope to read more of it soon. May you always find the inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/5/2011 4:44:00 AM

Lovely piece of poetry on the song of the country with nice images, Caroline

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/5/2011 4:15:00 AM

This lovely piece sounds like Paradise Caroline with your superb imagery and grand visuals my friend.. a place of repose and refreshment.. luv breathe tranquility ..which all search for luv..

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/5/2011 12:19:00 AM

beautiful poem, as a young man in England i always believed there was two Englands. the urban and the rural, this wonderful poem brings this home for me. awesome. Harry

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 4/4/2011 11:32:00 PM

Need to make sure I rated it. :)

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 4/4/2011 10:33:00 PM

Your choka gives me a certain peace of the soul, dear Caroline. "Feel the sun's spring smile While you walk terrains in bloom" and "The song I will play for you My love is what you will know Breathe tranquility." Great poetry. I wish I found that tranquility in my life... Love, your friend :)