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The Song of the Country

Leave it all a while
While I make a way for you
You have bravely crossed rough road
And you are weary.
See the country quiet
Quite a hiding place for you
Where you will not even know
A trace of city.
Feel the sun's spring smile
While you walk terrains in bloom
Where wild life will play its show
Just for you sweetly.
Hear the symphony
The song I will play for you
My love is what you will know
Breathe tranquility.
 
By CarolineCécile
Copyright © 04.04.11

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/14/2011 10:15:00 AM
a great piece of work, enjoyed reading thank you for reading my poetry and for your kind comments
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Date: 4/6/2011 7:52:00 PM
A relaxing enjoyable write, Caroline. I need to read this at work. ...Be well? I already is. :) thank you. right back at you
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Date: 4/6/2011 2:06:00 PM
Ah, so restful. Big cities? Bummer! Love, daver
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Date: 4/6/2011 12:27:00 AM
It is not me speaking in this poem actually, it is God speaking. :)
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Date: 4/5/2011 9:12:00 PM
So tender and compassionate, Caroline. Anyone who is blessed to know you as a friend is lucky. Few people offer "tranquility" and help others alleviate their stress. Sorry to hear nothing has changed, but I think there may be something special ahead for you. Keep the light of hope alive! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/5/2011 3:15:00 PM
Such a soft write dear poet...so inspiring, I just want to kick back and relax now ;) have a great week Caroline...much love, james
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Date: 4/5/2011 3:06:00 PM
Awesomely peaceful. Stunning final line, Caroline!
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Date: 4/5/2011 7:10:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your magnificently beautiful poetry Caroline. I enjoyed reading it and hope to read more of it soon. May you always find the inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/5/2011 4:44:00 AM
Lovely piece of poetry on the song of the country with nice images, Caroline
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Date: 4/5/2011 4:15:00 AM
This lovely piece sounds like Paradise Caroline with your superb imagery and grand visuals my friend.. a place of repose and refreshment.. luv breathe tranquility ..which all search for luv..
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Date: 4/5/2011 12:19:00 AM
beautiful poem, as a young man in England i always believed there was two Englands. the urban and the rural, this wonderful poem brings this home for me. awesome. Harry
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Date: 4/4/2011 11:32:00 PM
Need to make sure I rated it. :)
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Date: 4/4/2011 10:33:00 PM
Your choka gives me a certain peace of the soul, dear Caroline. "Feel the sun's spring smile While you walk terrains in bloom" and "The song I will play for you My love is what you will know Breathe tranquility." Great poetry. I wish I found that tranquility in my life... Love, your friend :)
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