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The Solution To the Sticky Toffee Pudding Dilemma - For Cecilia

Cecilia has set me a challenge – to order my favourite pud
If I can say sticky toffee pudding it would be oh so good

But I may make another error and it could come out so bad
If I said stiffy cockie pudding again it would make me oh so sad

But a thought has just occurred to me – I don’t need to use my voice
My husband can order for me, then I’ll get the pudding of my choice!

1st October 2015

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Scott Thirtyseven October 9, 2015 at 7:47 AM Love the ending. What a pleasure to read. Jan Allison October 9, 2015 at 8:14 AM Aww thanks Scott there is a follow up poem now too... I have a solution to my problem!:-) hugs jan xx

Kp Nunez October 4, 2015 at 8:34 AM Good thinking, Jan...as your friends can. Thanks for making me smile...hugs! Jan Allison October 4, 2015 at 8:54 AM Our friends always tease me when it comes to dessert and I've never dared order it since - now I have the perfect solution lol:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich October 2, 2015 at 6:56 PM you need to put a picture of stiffy cockie pudding. hahaha. Jan Allison October 2, 2015 at 6:58 PM err I'm trying to be taken seriously for my ramblings Andrea lol ... will see what I can find ha ha ha:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich October 2, 2015 at 6:55 PM haha, this is like the other one of yours! Hey, Jan, go see the cartoon I just put with Ms. Period. I found it quickly and now i have to finally get out of here and make dinner! Jan Allison October 2, 2015 at 6:58 PM will drop by I could do with a giggle:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus October 2, 2015 at 5:12 PM Enjoyed the light vein of these couplets, Jan, even though sticky toffee is not on my list! hugs // paul Jan Allison October 2, 2015 at 5:15 PM I was challenged to write this by Cecilia from my Just Desserts and follow up poem - i think I have found the solution to my problem now:-) Hugs Jan xx

Thomas Martin October 2, 2015 at 1:06 PM lol, do not know the puddings, b ut nice anyway! Jan Allison October 2, 2015 at 1:10 PM Oh its wonderful sponge with sticky toffee sauce :-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper October 2, 2015 at 12:25 PM Love it........ you are so good. Jan Allison October 2, 2015 at 12:28 PM LOL I had to rise to the challenge Cecilia set me and this is the perfect solution... will let you know if it works lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso October 1, 2015 at 11:29 PM I can see it now, this will become a TV Series!!! Loved this, especially after reading the other one!!! Jan Allison October 2, 2015 at 11:58 AM Let's hope there would be no cock ups if they ever recorded the series lol:-) hugs jan xx

David Fisher October 1, 2015 at 8:03 PM Good one Jan. I guess to get a job well done, you need a man. Jan Allison October 2, 2015 at 11:57 AM But if I hadn't had the disaster in the first place I may never have written my Just Desserts poem lol:-) hugs jan xx

Tim Smith October 1, 2015 at 6:05 PM Hope he doesn't mess it up....could sound worse. Jan Allison October 2, 2015 at 11:56 AM Sure could be a disaster Tim lol:-) hugs jan xx