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In the breathing forest came memories of my youth, Nothing more than happiness shadowed by the truth. The rising sun pulchritudinous like the smile on her face, Let me think of her once more of pure and simple grace. In the center of the wood lived a solemn rose, Surrounded by a cruel weed which prohibited it to grow. The weed was not considerate only thinking of itself, Hurt the little rose not caring of how it felt. Now the rose has grown up and overtowers the weed, Making it undernourished and causing it to bleed. Through tolerance and patience the rose has been well fed, And for the spiteful weed, he gained a brand new bed. Glancing to the falling moon, I've realized what I've done, I've killed my inner self by following the sun. I only hope that things will change far before the end, So that the enemy I have gained will turn to be my friend. 1989 Seventh Place 2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 15 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Mark Toney Third Place YOUR PERSONAL FAVORITE, NO. 2 Sponsored by: L MILTON HANKINS

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Date: 10/8/2022 10:10:00 AM
Dear Robert, it was wonderful to return and partake of this deep and thoughtful poem once again. Your heart is so beautifully expressed. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mark's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 10/7/2022 11:20:00 AM
Robert, a very thought-provoking retrospection. I will be thinking about this one for some time. A Fav for me. Congratulations on your win on Mile 15 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 16 has already started. Also, check out my blog post to view your current standing in the Marathon.
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Date: 11/13/2021 5:29:00 PM
Yes, I can see how this is your favorite of the rose poems. It's the best of the ones I 've read, and it's very meaningful as well. Thanks for sharing, Robert. This is so lovely.
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Date: 12/16/2021 10:14:00 AM
Thank you Andrea.
Date: 11/13/2021 5:29:00 PM
belated congrats on a win also!
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Date: 11/13/2021 8:57:00 AM
Robert, I love this poem, so meaningful and with a message and wonderfully penned also. The whole poem is awesome but that last verse really touched my heart. I have learnt in life that no matter how much we try, that not everyone will like us and there is nothing we can do to change that, just be yourself is my motto and people who matter will see the beautiful rose that dwells within ~ peace and tranquility _ Constance
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Date: 10/21/2021 11:20:00 AM
Wonderful write. with such depth and meaning. A haunting poem. God bless you always and Congrats on your win. Love, Gina
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Robert James Liguori
Date: 10/21/2021 12:13:00 PM
Thank you Regina. It is a poem I cannot escape from... first I wrote that has had so much meaning throughout my life.
Date: 10/20/2021 11:11:00 PM
Beautiful thoughts and lines. The self-realization aspect is very great. Congratulations!
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Date: 10/21/2021 12:14:00 PM
Thanks Christuraj. Amazing how we can add depth in just a handful of stanzas!
Date: 10/20/2021 6:44:00 AM
Great imagery flowing throughout the poem Robert... Congrats on your win with this beautiful write... God bless... ~ Ani
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Date: 10/21/2021 12:12:00 PM
Thanks Anitha! I tried to shape it, I guess like an envelope... story in a story.
Date: 10/19/2021 11:06:00 AM
Robert, congratulations on your win! Thank you so much for the opportunity to read this poem written so long ago! Your poetic talent was definitely there! Wonderful allegory. Delightful metaphor! I love the way you express the rose making a choice to grow above the weed - making life choices. All the best.
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Robert James Liguori
Date: 10/21/2021 12:11:00 PM
Thanks, back then it just came natural, now I'm trying to write with all these rules!
Date: 10/19/2021 6:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem Robert. I had to look up the word 'pulchritudinous' - I learn something new every day at PS. :) Cheers - Gary
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Date: 10/21/2021 12:10:00 PM
It is a beautiful word!
Date: 10/18/2021 8:07:00 PM
Dear Robert, your poignant pen is so beautifully expressive and impressive. Simply splendid poetry. Congratulations for your excellent win in Milton's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 10/21/2021 12:09:00 PM
Thank you, I was a young man when I wrote this poem.
Date: 10/18/2021 7:53:00 PM
Beautiful writing, Robert, and very deserving of this high placement in my contest. CONGRATULATIONS!
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Date: 10/21/2021 12:10:00 PM
Thank you for the placement. This poem has journeyed with me over the years.

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