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The Soft Song of Summer Breeze

Melodic tunes resound with night When stars begin flamed hours’ delight … There is a lilt circling the air As east winds rustle to prepare, Nocturnal valleys gently calm Releasing their ambrosial balm: We listen how jays croon again From verdant shrubs along the lane And love notes echo with graced ease The soft song of the summer breeze… Where fireflies red invite a dream Till kisses drift, weaving midstream. 9/4/2018 ------------------------- One In Five II Contest of Joseph May Phrase No. 5

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Lyric Man

Date: 9/28/2018 10:58:00 PM

So beautiful the lines of your winner, Nette.. your painting captivates!!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/20/2018 7:25:00 AM

Congrats nette, for taking the #1 spot..well earned, indeed!

Gary Smith

Date: 9/20/2018 4:35:00 AM

Just lovely Nette, congrats

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 9/20/2018 4:21:00 AM

Congratulations on your grand win, Nette.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 9/19/2018 10:01:00 PM

Your thoughts whisper gently along the page. Simply beautiful in so many amazing ways. :) Congratulations nette, on this win. ~ Brandy

Joseph May

Date: 9/19/2018 8:14:00 PM

Beautifully penned Nette..Congrats on your win..

Gary Smith

Date: 9/19/2018 7:05:00 PM

Lovely Nette, much enjoyed congrats :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/19/2018 6:56:00 PM

Beautifully written. Congratulstions for your win :)

Lyric Man

Date: 9/9/2018 11:06:00 PM

I went outside to read your work a second time. The sun was setting low. There was no humidity in the air. Indeed it was a perfect night. And there, in my swing chair, I felt you in the coastal breeze! Your poetry transcends, Nette!

James Peranteau

Date: 9/4/2018 4:35:00 PM

As discomforting the days have been 'bout mine live dear poet this August past, 90° and truly above, smogged with humidity, you have soooothed mine all with your lulling verse...Ty...Have a grand finale with regard your lovely Summer...Much luv, james