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The Soft Song of Summer Breeze

Melodic tunes resound with night
When stars begin  flamed hours’ delight …
There is  a lilt  circling the air
As east winds rustle to prepare,
Nocturnal valleys  gently calm
       Releasing their ambrosial balm:

We  listen how jays  croon again
From verdant shrubs along the lane
And love notes echo with graced ease  
The soft song of the summer breeze…
Where fireflies red invite a  dream
Till  kisses drift,  weaving midstream.



9/4/2018
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One In Five II Contest of Joseph May
Phrase No. 5

Copyright © Nette Onclaud | Year Posted 2018

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Lyric Man Date: 9/28/2018 10:58:00 PM So beautiful the lines of your winner, Nette.. your painting captivates!! Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 9/20/2018 7:25:00 AM Congrats nette, for taking the #1 spot..well earned, indeed! Login to Reply

Gary Smith Date: 9/20/2018 4:35:00 AM Just lovely Nette, congrats Login to Reply

Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 9/20/2018 4:21:00 AM Congratulations on your grand win, Nette. Login to Reply

Brandy Nicole Date: 9/19/2018 10:01:00 PM Your thoughts whisper gently along the page. Simply beautiful in so many amazing ways. :) Congratulations nette, on this win. ~ Brandy Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 9/19/2018 8:14:00 PM Beautifully penned Nette..Congrats on your win.. Login to Reply

Gary Smith Date: 9/19/2018 7:05:00 PM Lovely Nette, much enjoyed congrats :) Login to Reply

Heidi Sands Date: 9/19/2018 6:56:00 PM Beautifully written. Congratulstions for your win :) Login to Reply

Lyric Man Date: 9/9/2018 11:06:00 PM I went outside to read your work a second time. The sun was setting low. There was no humidity in the air. Indeed it was a perfect night. And there, in my swing chair, I felt you in the coastal breeze! Your poetry transcends, Nette! Login to Reply

James Peranteau Date: 9/4/2018 4:35:00 PM As discomforting the days have been 'bout mine live dear poet this August past, 90° and truly above, smogged with humidity, you have soooothed mine all with your lulling verse...Ty...Have a grand finale with regard your lovely Summer...Much luv, james Login to Reply

Ralph Sergi Date: 9/3/2018 6:03:00 PM I love the way you embrace a summer breeze, nette! Login to Reply

Tom Cunningham Date: 9/3/2018 5:00:00 PM Your verse made me forget that the autumn is fast approaching . Well written Nette. Good luck. Tom Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 9/3/2018 4:50:00 PM Pleasant like the summer breeze..melodious like the sound of music..a song aptly delivered in poetic words..a winning poem indeed, nette! Login to Reply

Aurore Severo Date: 9/3/2018 4:46:00 PM You are very talented, this was very nice to read, peace and love Aurore Login to Reply

Janice Canerdy Date: 9/3/2018 4:39:00 PM Excellent, Nette. Very enjoyable. Janice Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 9/3/2018 3:27:00 PM I love every line of this beautiful poem Nette. This is going into my faves! : ) Login to Reply

Chris Green Date: 9/3/2018 3:08:00 PM This was absolutely gorgeous Nette. Soothing and serene are the senses I feel while reading. Login to Reply

M. L. Kiser Date: 9/3/2018 2:56:00 PM Wonderful poem, love this stanza: "Where fireflies red invite a dream Till kisses glide, weaving midstream Breathless this season’s ardent thrill". Login to Reply