The Snowflake

The Snowflake

If I could borrow from nature’s hand a symbol, a modality,
That speaks of me 
The snowflake I choose for its originality.

No two look quite alike, each wears a different face
Yet when they fall upon a barren world defaced
They blend in harmony with beauty’s grace.

1-28-22
Contest: Bite Size Poem no34
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Brown Avatar
January 30, 2022 at 2:23 PM
Sam I enjoyed your poem. I loved the words "blend in harmony with beauty’s grace" Good luck in the contest. Blessings ~ Debra
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February 2, 2022 at 10:10 AM
Thank you so much Debra for you lovely message. We truly are stronger when we share our giftedness as God's community and ambassadors! Amazing how that happens. I have enjoyed your poems. Sending you and your pen blessings.
Kaur Avatar
January 29, 2022 at 4:32 PM
What a graceful thought! And original...and your expression is always a masterstroke. Regards
Kauffman Avatar
February 2, 2022 at 10:07 AM
Harpreet, thank you many times over. I am humbled by your lovely message and it means so much to me - inspirational! So glad you enjoy this little poem. It is one of my favorites. All the best.
Proxenos Avatar
January 29, 2022 at 1:22 PM
This is such a delicate beautiful poem. I can feel the snowflakes dropping on my face and watch while the the rest surround where I stand . Captivating write Sam . Hugs blessings Jennifer
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February 2, 2022 at 10:05 AM
Hello dear friend! Watching snowflakes fall is truly a fun and very "captivating," hypnotic experience - one of serene peace that quiets the noisy world around us. So much fun to have a friend stand with in this enchantment! Sending you blessings of peace, prayers and a hug! Hope all is well!
George Avatar
January 28, 2022 at 8:29 PM
This is so beautiful Sam.... I just love the thought. Each one of us is unique, but when we merge together, what a collective identity we procure and what strength and grace that identity exudes!
Kauffman Avatar
February 2, 2022 at 9:59 AM
Valsa, thank you! Agreed! I have always thought it takes all of the snowflakes to create a beautiful winter picture and it takes all of us coming together to create a picture of grace. I use this poem when I get to work with children. Sending you blessings of grace and many thanks for your lovely message.
Poet Avatar
January 28, 2022 at 8:23 PM
Every time I read your poems, Sam, it seems to be so profound, pleasant, and with excellent diction. Thank you for your generous visit to my page; I hope you are doing well and that your weekend is enjoyable.
Kauffman Avatar
February 2, 2022 at 9:55 AM
Hi Lasaad! Your lovely note put a big :D on my face. I am so glad that you have been enjoying these offerings. Knowing that truly inspires me to keep writing - to keep creating - under the Spirit's wings! All is well. I hope the same for you. Sending you blessings!
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January 28, 2022 at 5:22 PM
Thank you Vijay! Snowflakes truly do turn the barren winter world into a wonderland as if by magic. Take care. Sending you blessings of harmony and grace!
Pandit Avatar
January 28, 2022 at 1:36 PM
Lovely poem Sam--so true about snowflakes!
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